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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome! *sobs* Poor Kagomeeee...Oh well, it was really well written! ^.^ I can't wait to read more! Umm, what's your pen name at ff.net? I'd really like to read your other stuff!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written! I am a huge fan of dark fics, and you've done a great job with the first two chapters. I have a fic (not here, mm.org) that is somewhat similar with the depressing end of the battle, except in mine he kills everyone but Kagome, Inuyasha, and Sesshoumaru...but it's definately not as well done as what you have written. The emotions you have in this are very well written. Great work, I look forward to more ^^
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That's horrible... but a wonderful idea!!! What did they do with the Shikon no Tama... or is that how Kagome killed Naraku? ^^ Keep going!!!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gasping for breath* Must... have... more...! *dies*
Blast. Foiled again!
Blast. Foiled again!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome! You killed off Ginta and Hakkaku! And Kagura! Noooooo!
No, just kidding. Good story. Deep andk rek read. I understand the reasoning behind all the deaths to bring across your goal. Continue. Whlse lse is there to say?
Oh yes, thank you for reviewing!
No, just kidding. Good story. Deep andk rek read. I understand the reasoning behind all the deaths to bring across your goal. Continue. Whlse lse is there to say?
Oh yes, thank you for reviewing!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor guys! I really enjoyed this, Eloy. It's very well thought out and well written. The showdown with Naraku was fantastic! And I hope you mean to give Kouga feeling in his legs again, among other things ~_^ *is a pervy girl and proud of it*
Seriously, though, bravo!
Seriously, though, bravo!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww (sniffles)......Kagome died, but at least it was a good death, she saved them and said her goodbyes..(sniffles again), and at least Kikyo didnt him.him..(does not like Kikyo) luved this story cant wait to read the next chap..:-) ty for letting me know it was up..:-)
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write more please its really good
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww come on...how can ya leave it hanging like that??? (sniffles) let me know when you update please?????? ty ty..:-)
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I'm not flaming, the only reason I'm reading this is because I need a good cry I hope you deliver. but I'm sure the next chapter will be the last I read...I just can't read stories where the demons I like are in love with each other.