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for The Hurdle

by Dariana

person afris
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot and that fic is something i can understand most people don't understand how easy it is to hurt someone so deeply with a smiple words untill their soul is already shatterd . please make more to this
person KazeKitten
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
its really good, you should continue it... depression is something most inu yasha writers never really get into.
person pink twilight
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh thats so sad but its so good please u should update it and make it a story. GOOD JOB!!
person KOHARIA
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you should continue it sounds very good ^_^
person Sam
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
U should really consider continuing this its really good. I've never seen Kagome portrayed this way and its very interesting.
Well, I hope you continue it
:)
person zsazsa
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm normally not into angsty stuff but this rocked. Please keep writing.
person BlueRose
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oohhhhh, I like this one! It's well-written and dark...please continue writing it. I want to see what happens next! Poor Kagome :(
person RavenShadow
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great you really captured the emotion behind the act, please continue, update soon!!
person dark inulover
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow i liked tirstirst chapter and i hope you write more for it. i liked the dark and depressing feel of it.^^ ja ne till next time