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for The Hurdle

by Dariana

person liTtLeKiTtY
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh thats so sad hope your not doing that. I hope you write more to this story its really good so far.
person PirateLunaSpike
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, amazing... That was an excellent one-shot,.. or you could be kind and continue to add on to this lovely masterpiece. I would love you even if you added only only last chapter on to it. Like a chapterm Inm Inu Yasha's POV about how he really feels about Kagome, love or not. Then he could smell the blood.. etc etc. This fanfic was amazing. Please do not let your talent go to waste and continue to write for all the poor patethic souls like me, that forever feel the need to find, read and review the very best of fanfics.
person Mija
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey its better to write down stuff than actually do it..(knows from experience here) and i love this story i know its a bit sad, but i understand how you can love someone soo much but not have it reed ted that it hurts soo much more inside that you have to hurt outside to block it out, ok ok im being morbid but i was a very sad child lol no had tons of friends and junk but inside i hurt still..anyhow i like this fic but as i can see you havent updated in a looooooooooonooong time....sooooooo will ya please update??? or is it just that one shot????
person Aphrodite
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow , girl u need to update like right about now and make this into a fic!!!!!
person QueenC
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh god this is so good. please continue it!! and please not let it be true that inuyasha doesn't care about her. update update continue continue!!
person nobody special
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, contiune
person Amanda
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!! This could become such a good I/K fic! So, please consider working on another chapter. =D
person Cuteness!
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was angsty, though you handeld it very well, indeed! I think you need to continue and add a chapter devoted to the love of Inu Yasha and Kagome as only us fans know it! ^__^ I enjoyed reading this, my only complaint is that is was far too short to suit my tastes. n____n
person Pixi
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm a recovering Self Injurer. I've been recovering for the past couple of years. I don't cut anymore, but i will gouge with my fingernails... Anyway. Thank you. You got the helplessness and the self loathing and the feelings that happen when you cut. I appreciate reading this. Please if you want to continue writing it, I will continue reading.
person bebebaby
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
god i relaly really love this fic please continue it i love how kagomes all angsty. i get tired of her being all happy all the time. no one is always that happy especially if u have to put up with all of inu's shit. please please update as soon as u can.