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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I think this would make a great angst story. Having everyone else live happily ever after, while Kagome, the one most people sympathize with, dies alone-never gets to live her life loved in the way she longs to most. Why don't you read "Unworthy One" by Vincent. It might help you out of your rut. The story is great and leads you through all emotions. I really enjoyed this story and hope to read more soon.

Wow... poor Kagome... I can understand her doing it, but I could see Inuyasha being the one who said the one word, since he's always telling her that she's useless.

ohhhh, i love it!!! please write some more chapters. this story just screams continuation!!
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I noticed the date where you started this story. Yet you never made any chapters expect the first. I read this story off a friend of mine's favorites. It seems A LOT of people already like this story. Maybe cause of your great writing skills. It just seems so alive to me i guess you could say. I wish you'd make new chapter but it seems like you decided not to a long time ago. Yet, i won't give up on this story. I'll wait forever lmao seems retarded I know. Wish you'd get someone else to write the rest if you can't cause I LOVE IT!!! I'm usally not like this if the person didn't write A long chapter. Yet, something is differnet I guess its cause I kinda feel the way she does about things. I don't know but n e wayz i'll quiet typing but try and complete this story. Maybe you can turn it like she kills herself at the end or something. I'm not really sure I just wish u'd make up more to it. WEll, at lest try. Hope to be seeing a new chapter SOON!

please this is really interesting keep going

continue please it's good

I know this is only filler, but could you continue it, you've given it too much plot.

Wow talk about OOC Kagome cutting herself this is a really good story so far I hope that you can update soon.

Wow. Great story so far. I really think you should continue it. Sounds like she is being abused by a step-father. Or used to be. Something sent her off on the edge. And why did Inu-Yasha come there. Did he suspect something going on with her before and is now checking it out? abo about her feelings about Naraku having most of the Shikon no Tama? Go with it. Keep up the good work.