rate_review Reviews

This story is AWESOME!! You can't leave me in suspense though. Please continue.

Your story is great I hope you plan to write more soon its real good.

This is an amazing story. I am glad that I found it.
You write so professional. The emotions between Rin and Sesshomaru fell so real. I have been reading this for two days now and it is wonderful. I laughed from reading the first six chapters. I can tell that you do not like senior citizens driving slow. (LOL)
This is a wonderful story and I am only three chaps away from finishing it.

OMG!! This story is sooo good!!! And what a way to leave it!!!! AAHH! Update soon please!!

RN

ok, i don't know how many reviews you get for this fic but it had better be a whole damn lot!! b/c why? b/c you deserve it for a fic like this! thi is the god damn sexiest fic I have ever read. i mean, one could squirm in their chair reading some of these scenes. i have to compliment on many things.first, the characterization was wonderfully round. no half way characters here! every detail, emotion and reaction was realistic and plausbile. the conversations seemed real adn the interaction between characters was insanely developed. secondly, the sex scenes are beyond hot. they are past the boiling point. but thats not what makes them so great. its the fact that they are realistic portrayls of sexual experiances! alot of authors have their star characters having sex as if it hurts for 3 seconds adn then its all easy street from there! you, however, stuck to a little place called reality and it was a great thing!! also, the fact that rin does not come every single time is also an impressive bow to real life. kudos!! thirdly, the writing is wonderful. your word choice and your style are all very fitting in the tone of the story. you sometimes have this way of describing thingst ist is just so remarkably on tune, it blew my mind. it is most impressive. finally, the plot line! now, if i may be honest, the plotline itself is not that original. its just not. HOWEVER, what you did with this rather trite plot line, largely in part from your excellent characters, is unbelievable. you transformed it into a wholly new story that is fresh adn interesting in its delivery. and although some of the twists were foreseeable, certain things were not ( I was definitly expecting the miki murder to come up but was shocked when they didn't get caught in the classroom (which was the hottest scene in the whole fic BTB)) on the whole, all i can say is:
I AM SO GOD DAMN IMPRESSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank god you updated so that i could discover this excellent bit of work. I bow before your talent.

Oh my goodness, you are officially my favorite new writer. Although this story in no way at all resembles Inuyasha other than the two names, I am totally in love with your writing. You manage to combine the plot and the sex with taste, not making it seem dirty as some of the other writers here can. But, you're cliffhanger sucks... I really hope that you are an author that likes to update quickly. Please please please!

I am running on two hours of sleep but have managed to stay awake and read this entire story for the past few hours. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Again, please update soon!

Hey, i love the story!!! One bitty detail though. Loyola is a prestigous school, you were right bout that, but its an all boys school. A minor detail. I used to live 20 minutes away from it.......But other than that, your story rock!keep up the good work!

Oh, you are too cruel. Talk about cliffhangers. This is my favorite story that you have written and I check the staus for a new chapter on your site constantly. I must say this is by far the worst, cliff... and I know how long it takes you before you update one of your amazing stories. Ok, enough of my sniveling. I just recently tried my hand at writing (No where near your league of talent) but I suspect the fact that your stories influenced my lemon writing is fairly obvious. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Please whatever you do please do not kill Rin's father. I know that Rin does not have any relatives living on the
Inuyasha series,but think that having him alivong ong with Sess would bring closure in that chapter of Rins life. Update soon.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! no kidnap!! i!! i cant take it! i want sess and rin to be together so badly im going to pop a blood vessel in my BRAIN! man, i love this story. good times, BUT NO DEATH to ppl we love - namely sess and rin. and if she has to get kidnapped, please dont let those men rape her. gah, too good, i dont know what to do. i cant wait till the next chapter. keep on writing!