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damn this is a great fanfic please update soon

I loved it!

Oh My God!!! That was an awesome story. I just couldn't stop reading it. There were so many twists and turns that I totally did not expect. I loved the plot, the characters and there personalities, I just loved everything about this story. I really hope you keep writing like this, keep up the totally awesome work.

This stiry is starting out really well. I really like the plot line. You have an awesome style of writing and, though I have sta started the story I am guessing it is going to be very good. Keep up the good work.

I know this review is very very late, but I couldn't just NOT review after I finally tripped over this story again and FINALLY got to read the last two chapters!!^^
I love the story...but the twists and all at the end (including the inu, kag, miro, and a sango fan service you gave,) added that extra *oomph* it needed. Great job on this story,
it's really easy to see that you put a lot into it, too...and I am hoping to maybe see some more fics from you as well, because this story was just...mind-blowing...for me.
Just letting you know that I'm going to be putting this fic on my faves list (YAY FOR YOU!!) and that I reeeeeaaaaaaallllllllllllyyyyyyy love it.
Much Love,
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This was a beautiful forbidden romance and drama. Everything flowed perfectly. I noticed you have some evil cliffhangers though. I was very happy that you perfectly described the REAL side of sex and not the fantasy ideal one. (And the lemons were just as good.) Your story is one of the reasons I am loving the Somaromaru/Rin pairing mond mnd more. (But my heart will always be with InuYasha/Kagome) Can’t see Sesshomaru with black hair. I tried really hard to imagine before giving up. And using the lesser characters was a nice touch. I see you even managed to squeeze the main ones in with all the personalities in tact. The abuse section was not over or under done. I’m happy that you logically pieced the events together and managed to keep the reader on their toes. I just knew that perverted sheriff was shooting at a ghost! Sad about him and his son though. It’s true that stuff like that happens everyday but it’s scary to think about it. I was delighted at how Rin address Yuki‘s (that was her name right?) mom, brilliant answer. Makes me wonder if this story should be used as an educational tool for adults. Well I’ve rambled enough. I loved this story and I hope to read more of your work in the future.

i didnt mean for u to write a sequl to this i meant to write more stories. i realized what i said was unclear!

i love your story write more!!!

Hello! I absolutely love this story to death! It was really great. I am a Sess/Rin fan, but i usually don't read fanfics for them since some people do them really badly... but you, on the other hand, a faa fabulous job! The ending of the story almost made me cry because it was just sooo cute. In fact, i actually only started reading the story because it sounded very similar to a story i just started writing (i haven't posted it or anything, it was just a thought bouncing around in my head). Of course, none of the specifics were the same (and my story is an Inu/Kag) but a lot of the basic circumstances were... but when i started reading your story i got completely enthralled and pulled in. You addressed every possible aspect (like, even at the end i was nervous for how Rin's dad would take the news of her and Sess being together, etc, etc). I also loved how you made the connection between Miki's killer and Rin (even the boy who identified the killer, that all added up at the end!) It was great... was very romance-novel like... hee hee. I was also very amused and pleased by how you allowed Miroku, Sango, Inu and Kagome to worm their ways in at the end... I was missing them at the beginning of the fic. You didn't disappoint in any way and i truly loved the story!! I'm looking forward to reading more from you (although i'm not sure if i'd even wanna post my fic now since you did such a good job that it's a little embarrassing ^-^). Your fic was truly marvelous!! -Princess-

absolutely adored the story, id sit here and check the site every couple of days hopeing for an update but never found one but when you did it was christmas all over again lol, but please write another, yours is one of the 3 sess/rin stories i like please keep up the great work