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for The Guise of Apathy

by TornEmpathy

person myinu
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! This is sooo awesome!! Keep it going!
person akumu
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, is kagome going to "get sick" on him? personally, if i felt that bad and went through that sudden shock i might, but that would be such a very, very bad thing. hope to read more soon! please update quickly!
person jackie
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY!! This story is awsome!!! Please keep updating!!! =)
person Byjinder
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome! I can't wait to read more. If it were my story I'd be in love with it too, you should be proud. It's a wonderful creation.
person akumu san
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you are going to update this right? because ya know, if you dont your fan girl sittin here will be very disapointed. extreamly so. hope to see more soon!
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The romance in this is great! Unlike a lot of stuff i read here, you are working hard to make Sesshomaru and Kagome really fall hard, the way Takahashi makes her characters go. Love it. Oh, and don't be too hard on your writing, it's a bit rough, but nothign editing couldnt' fix. Compared to what's out there in the fanfic world, this story is very well crafted. Keep it up, I will be looking forward to the next chapter!
person Pallas
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, this is a lovely story! I like how you characterize Kagome and Sesshomaru, and how their emotions regarding one another evolve. Very well written! Please continue!!
person TheAlmightHentaiCloset
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to sign in so.... If this is the end.... I will cry. T_T
person REDWOLF
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Im so glad that U R UPDATING now! this is a very interesting story!!!
person Sidra
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh... how can you do that to me? The cliffhanger ist so evvviiiilll ^^ j/k. I love this paring... Please update soon ^____^