rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I would like to know what happened to the others! Kagome can't forget Inuyasha! Things just don't work that way!

EVIL FERRETS!!! There will be many, many evil ferrets placed in your room while you are sleeping if there is not another chapter! SOON :[ >'o'<

If you don't update.....soon......I will sic my army of killer ferrets on you!!!!

Has this poor fic been abandoned? I'm so bummed!! Please update!!!

What happened??? Update....Update....Update!!!

Well, I like the story. It is a bit chopped up between chapters, but it is exciting. I'm kind of disappointed that there hasn't been any interaction between Kagome and Inu Yasha yet (when he's conscious, that is). You really should proof read your story before you post it, it would help the flow. Your spelling and grammer need some work, and beware of pitfalls like run on sentances and repeating the same thing in a sentance twice (I always have these problems with my own stories, but I am a perfectionist and won't post them unless thay are corrected). If you use a microsoft word program, use spell/grammer check, or else get a beta reader. I think you have a good story going, full of action and suspense, and look forward to reading more.

I love the story.but there is one little question I need you to answer me. What was the pairing for this story. Don't tell me it's Kouga and Kagome. Because I hate that pairing so badly. (i read just only inu and kag fanfics)

im with Pan. kouga/kagome pairings make me cry

Three cheers for Kouga! Hehe But, poor Inuyasha...I do sort of hope he lives, even if it's just to see Kagome without her memory (^.^) Of course, I have no idea where you're going with this fic, though I do intend to continue reading as you update to find out (^_^)