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for When all is Lost

by vampire7princess

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chrs? rs?
person weijaa
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you don't update.....soon......I will sic my army of killer ferrets on you!!!!
person dreamer
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i really like your fic but i think something is wrong with ch.5. It starts off that theyre kissing and then screscreams shipo and then it ends? The next one is of her talking about her home. What happened? Anyway, can you try to fix it. I like it and update soon.
person Ashleigh
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!!! This story is soooo good. ^___~
person kagomereborn
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great! *waitng*
person Ashley
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dont listen to what people say.
It's true that it does have some resemblence to ADSALAD, but you wrote it.
You didn' steal it. Dont worry. Your doing fine with the story.
Im also glad that Sesshy actually loves Kagome. and the same with Kag.
Keep up th good work.
person kagomereborn
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can't wait , write more soon^_^
person treuse
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sess was 2 cold 2 but i must say that he is not ooc. continue this story plz i like it.
person Ashley
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for spacing it out.
Its a lot better to read now.
Update soon please.
person lil weirdo...
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! really good so far...i like your writing style! its very unique ^_^ i...well i REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY! ITS SO KOOL! update soon ya? thanx a bunch!