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I SPY SOMETHING SMALL GREEN AND PERVERTED....I DON'T KNOW COULD IT BE JAKEN?
THIS STORY WAS SO COOL. AFTER FINISH READING I HAD THE GREATEST URGE TO BE BONDAGED..RIGHT NOW
DO YOU THINK COLD SHOWERS WORK FOR GIRL? KEEP UPDATING AND KEEP ON TRUCKING.

QUESTION_____IF SESSHOUMARU WERE TO GET A PROSTHETIC LEFT ARM COULD HE WEILD THE TETSUIGA. OR DOES IT SPECIFICALLY HAVE TO BE A HUMAN ARM OR WHATEVER?????????????????
SESSHOUMARU IS SO HOT.

I've gotten some interesting reviews and responses to this story. I thought I might address some of them here. The only reason Sesshomaru wants a shard in my story is because he needs it to keep his human arm from rotting so he can take Tetsusaiga from Inu-Yasha. I have not seen all the anime, only what was shown on CN, so I drew from the episode where Naraku gave him an arm that could use Tetsusiga, since I don't know if he ever gets to use Tetsusaiga in the future. I am still collecting the manga as well. Also, I don't know where in the story this takes place, chronologically. But I do know it comes after my other stories (see "The Unexpected.") (The only fic I have written that is not related is the "To Love and Protect" story.) So since it comes after "The Unexpected" Kagome and Inu-Yasha have become lovers. I hate unrequited love, so I had to put Kagome with Inu-Yasha because she loves him. I find it funny that many people seem to like Kagome and Sesshomaru as lovers vs. Inu-Yasha and Kagome. Personally, I never thought they had any reason to be together unless you like AU fics more. Anyway, I am thinking of updating this story (by that I mean doing some re-writes) and am working on another chapter. Thanks to all who gave me constructive critiques.

I love Sesshoumaru, and I still think this fic is great so far. I've not once read a fic that strayed fthe the fact that Sesshoumaru has no interest in the shards, and I'm quite curious to know exactly why he wants them. Also, se Inu Inuyasha reckless in his anger, directing his blow towards not only his brother, but Rin, was quite believable.

Mmm. dark fic, i'm surprised Sesshomaru didn't whip them for his sadistic purpoas was well, and hope he comes back. Didn't find any spelling or grammer errors so kudo's for that. Sesshomaru is unusually OOC, and we can clearly see his desparation to get the jewel shards. But how can he get the shards from Kagome or Sango when they're naked? Not very smart of him here. Just update cus i'll read.

Is Sesshoumaru going to live? Hurry update.

Hmmm, I liked it! Even though I am an undying fan of Sesshoumaru-sama, I still enjoyed it. However, even though this was a short piece... I k mok more emotions should have passed between Kagome and Inuyasha at the end. She was raped, for Christ?s sake... Inuyasha would have been furious, maybe even distant or something. He wouldn't want her to die for the shards. However, this IS your story. You'll do what ya like of course! If you go back and make big changes at any time, or add to it, please e-mail me so I may come back.

That was an awesome story, you really caught my attention with the detail. Keep writing ^_^