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for A Rage Between Brothers

by Rukhsana

person Kurai
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...interesting title to chapter...
person Kenji
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, sesshy never left the forest. i assume he was masteurbating to the whole scene with kagome and inu
person Sei
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your muse must be related to my muse (^_^) I never know where things are going until my fingers hit the keys!

At any rate, I like the meeting with Sesshoumaru, and I am curious about his feelings for the child-to-be. Will he be a father, or will he eat the baby for dinner? lol I'll just have to wait and see (^_^)
person Kenji
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice fic. i wonder how you are gonna portray sesshy in the next chap
person Sei
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I wonder what Lord Sesshoumaru will think about fathering a hanyou. Nice chapter, I'm enjoying the seriousness of this fic.
-Sei
person Lachesis
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you write about the rape like you've actually experienced it. talk about bringing up emotions i didn't think i still felt. good story.
person Lady Sethia
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOh I loved it. Not very many peeps write dark fics, good to have a change. Please continue!!
person Sei
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I like the emotions you have going on with Inuyasha, and Kagome.
person Nameless
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update. this is a good story.
person kmf
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very dark, but beautifully written. Its an interesting slant to have Kagome and Inuyasha sleeping together so early on in their relationship, but I think it works very well. Im curious to see if Rin manages to save Sess, and whether his near death experience teaches him a lesson. Keep writing!