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Good reaction from Shippou, for some reason I had never thought of him feeling like he was being "replaced" should Kagome and Inuyasha have a baby. I think you're still doing well with this, even if your muse is gone. I hope she comes back, though ^^ Oh, and another thing while I'm thinking of it, you bear children... though...you can bare them if they're clothed ~_^ I tend to mistype that a lot myself *grins*

man i hate shippo. good fic though. lol

i really hoe that shesshy lets the baby live. and inuyasha embarssed, now that's something to see. keep writing. it's really good. je na. ~__^

Ah, the confrontation with Shippou! At least Inuyasha didn't hurt the poor little guy. The reactions were cute I waI was surprised that Shippou didn't ask Kagome, but then you wrote about his concerns...Inuyasha not hurting Kagome, etc. Good work showing the kitsune's stubborn side!

You know, my muse keeps skipping out on me when I go to write chapters on a certain fic (not uploaded here, but on ff.net and mm.org). She just leaves me high and dry! I think they enjoy toying with writers.

i love this fanfic, therefore i love u.... keep going please? *puppy-dog eyes*

ok i like the story until the part where shesshy rapped the girls. that just disgusted me. and now sango's pregent, god u must b eviut kut keep writing. shesshy has to let the child live. even though it will b a hanyou it's still his child and if he doesn't then u will have to die. plz keep writing.

There's nothing wrong with chapter six...but I know exactly what you are feeling. I hate when I put out a chapter that I don't feel is all it could be (which is most of the time hehe). I think it's good that you've addressed Miroku's feel for for Sango, and her reaction was quite believable. I only wonder what will happen after the baby is born, should she decide to resume their relationship...not that I doubt Miroku's intentions...but that Sesshoumaru might try to kill him if Miroku acts as a father (even if Sesshoumaru wants to kill his half breed son). I'll just have to wait and see what your muse decides ^^

This fic is good, you have an interesting writing style, and thats a good thing, keep it up

Poor Shippou! The events of this chapter were unexpected, but that's one of the reasons I like it. I just *giggles* never pictured Sesshoumaru giving Shippou "the talk." Nice work (^_^)

What is Sesshy up to...Does he want Kagome too? Damn, what's up with these demons especially Sesshy!