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for A Rage Between Brothers

by Rukhsana

person Sei
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see that Kagome misses Inuyasha as much as he misses her! I like the combination of feelings and lemon in this chapter...and the mention of Kagome's healing.
person Mija
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww I soo luv this chap...romanctic and hot...cant wait for the next Chapter..please update soon k??
person Mija
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wellllllllll congradulationsssss...I know its early but didnt even know so I wanted to say Congrats!!! and btw i sooooooo luv this story and I luved seeing it up right now...just had to read it..lol...Ive been waiting for an update...(dont take that the wrong way) lol...just meant I really really like this fic and was glad ya updated..:-) ty and congrats again..
person LadySesshou
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can almost see Inuyasha's ears perking up when Miroku tells him to go after Kagome ^^ For some reason, I hadn't thought much about what would happen when Kagome returned home. Having her check out the rape related books was a good touch..naturally, she would want to research the after effects of such a trauma.
person Danni:)
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ha~~ your story is great~~ :)
Think U have put lots of energy to write this. :)
keep it up pls~~ :P
Actually it is not the type of fanfic for me.:P Cos i think sessy is a very sensitive but kind guy deep inside.He will never rape somebody. :) haha! But he really looks very bad at the begining~~ Sad :P
hope U can catch up with the story soon. :) For manga I have read up to Vol 30,anime ESP 116. :P Hope U will find out wat sessy is really like later. :) hahaha! :p I believe they will be fight against Naraku together soon. :P Actyally if paying attention to read all the details in thega,Uga,U may find very few characters in a jap anime/manga is a totally baddy.they just appear bad at first cos at the beigining all the affort has been in in to bulid good names for the main characters. :P and only after that the story will tell more abt the "baddies". hahaha!
Pls Don't beat me for leaving review like this~~ :P just feel must say something for sessy. haha!
but it is your story~~ write in the way U like it~ :D Don't worry abt wat others are thinking.

Danni~~ :D
person kenji
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ur giving birth august 19? wheee, im born august 19, 1986
person LadySesshou
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Inuyasha will explain the succubus...poor guy. And you pretty much mentioned my biggest belief about Sesshoumaru...I even mentioned it to someone yesterday...the reason he seems so strange is because he does what he wants, when he wants, and how he wants, without caring what others will think. I don't think he ever changes for better or worse (in the manga and anime), he merely does as he pleases.

Poor Shippou...I have a feeling he's going to come out of this a bit more mature.
person lilchickidy0six
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi there i really like your story plz write more soon!!! thanks much!! ^_^;;
person LadySesshou
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, now my head is full of questions, which is a *good* thing (^_^) Of course they're predictable ones...what's gonna happen, how's Inuyasha gonna react, why's Sesshoumaru doing this in the first place, etc. I'm glad your muse is back!
person Mija
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! (sniffles) i care have been waiting for more updates...:-) still want more so i hope its sooon..:-) hint hint..lol