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The only problem that stood out was your use of passed and past. You say things like, "get passed" when it should be "get past."

Moving on ^^ I like the development of the feelings between Inuyasha and Kagome...the way she has drawn away from him, the way he feels because of it...then the slight change after they both talk to a close friend. The only part of the story that bothers me is that Sango's pregnancy isn't really mentioned...however, if I were to read this from the first chapter to this one right now, I don't think that would stand Si Since I didn't have to go back and read the entire thing before this update (which is unusual...I usually do, but this fic has always stuck well in my mind ^^), it just seemed more obvious. Now, if what I just said made any sense whatsoever, I want a cookie *laughs* I'm glad that you're still writing on this...believe me, I know all about not having time or opportunity to write!

i seriously think sesshoumaru should be killed off for what he did. sango and miroku can be together as husband and wife, and they can use the jewel to turn sango's hanyou baby fully human.

Your story is so good! Thank goodness your mseemseems to be thriving and well. I also thank your wonderful skill with the English language, sentence structure and usage. There are so few errors in your writing that they do not detract from the compelling storyline...thank you, thank you, thank you! I HAVE to know what happens next! I love the way you've developed the characters without straying too far from their original personalities. Please update soon!!! Also, please keep us updated on how Daniel is doing. He must be pretty big by now. It's late but congratulations!

Congratulations to you on the birth of your baby boy Daniel!!! You two take care! ^_^ I'm looking forward to more of your story when you get a bit of free time. My kids are kinda big now, but I know how it feels ^_^

very good....i look forward to the next chapter!! and congratulations..

Congratulations to you!!

Oh, I love the story.......since you are nursing, you have my infinite patience........update whenever you can.....^_^

Ah, I'm glad that Kagome wasn't mad at Inuyasha...it shows her maturity, and is quite different from how she is normally portrayed.

I'm also glad that things are going well for you...so, what do you think of parenthood? ^^ Hopefully, for your sake, he doesn't have nights and days mixed up!

My sleep fogged mind...I should have added that I am quite curious about the exact nature of Kagome's feelings. I would think that she would be hurt, or possibly doubtful about what happened...somewhat of an additional blow to her delicate feelings since her rape. The "I'm no longer good enough" type of feelings, even if she knows that it's not true. Of course, that is my "it's too early in the morning and I have the flu" review *laughs*

awwwwwwww congrats on your baby boy..(claps and smiles for you)...and I luv this update, yet sad that things are not strained between them again...for all intents Inu was taken advantage too wasnt he??? he had not wanted to be with Kikyo, or the demon he thought was Kikyo, he was molested I say, and Kagome should understand right??? sigh..great chap I soo cant wait for the next update but I know it will be hard right now..again congrats on your bundle of joy..:-) huggs Mija

Hey I just read your entire fan fiction!
lol!
I really like it!
Good luck with your pregnancy and upcoming birth!
Can't wait until you update again!
^_^