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for A Rage Between Brothers

by Rukhsana

schedule July 19, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Finally fixed my log in. So here goes _

Miroku already proposed to Sango in an earlier chapter...before the pup was born. She had told him if she could she would. But at the time she wanted to wait til after she knew the fate of her then unborn child.  But in this chapter you have him proposing again and sorta accepting again like it's the 1st time. 

I congratulate u on finishing this story thou.evem after so many years. It's frustrating when good fan fiction gets abandoned or forgotten about. So many unfinished works out there...and no end in sight. So much appreciate you completing your work. I have enjoyed reading them all

person Suniko
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! It's not done? I like it. Please email me when you update it. I hate to be continude. But I can't complain I have two stories that I haven't finish yet. I do have a question. Some of the words you are using is it just a type-o or is it really words like Japaness? You are a better writter than me. I suck at spelling and grammer. English is the only language I know and I suck at it. I was better at math and science and arts when I in High School. English was the only subject that was bring my GPA down. Anywho. Please email me when you have update so I could read it. Keep up the good work.

Suniko
person Suniko
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I like it so far. But I have to finish it later. But what I have read so far is great! I wish time haven't crep up on me. It's late and I have to get up early. But I will come back and finish it. (Hopefully tomorrow night when I have the change.) I wish I could have finish reading it tonight. :-( LOL But Im start to see double. Keep it up! Good night.
Suniko
person Vyper
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story.....can't wait until the next chapter is done. What will Sesshoumaru do with his son?
person Ozz
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice!
Got me all hot and bothered... want someone to tie me to a futon like that!
HeHeHe...
person Annie
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved t! I hapened on your story by accident, and it thriled me. I love the show, but there's a little something missing, sex, and you filled that gap! I really thought it was imaginative. Now I have to look on the site if I can know if Sango get's the baby, and all that stuff!
person Jaharia
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I ran across this story and fell in love with it. Let me just say thats it's awesome.
I hope your going to continue with it when time permits.

Thanks,
Zah
person Crislee Souza
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have became a big fan of your fanfic and have read it four times already familiarizing myself with it. I am a big IY fan and my fav. character is Sesshy. I hope you will continue this story I am looking forward to Chapters 25-30 if you plan on writing that much that is email me updates please?
Sincerely Cyberkitten938 aka Crislee Souza.
person SP777
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O-o-okay. O_o

I'm completely puzzled just WHAT exactly happened to Sesshoumaru when Rin used Tenseiga on him?!?! Could the old Sesshoumaru have died? *wink* Because his actions are out there.

EXPLAIN.
person Menoma_Minx
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM

As you are too busy updating your to do list around the house to update one of my favorite stories on tite;ite; I decided to free up some of your time

http://flylady.net/

She can show you how to cut down your chores in thuse use to about 15 minutes a day, and still allow you to be able to keep the entire house clean this way no matter how messy everyone else in the house is . She's been a huge help to quite a few people I know , and I'm betting she can help you too :-)

now granted, you can spend your newly freed up time anyway you like, but a new chapter would be a nice thank you for the web site I just gave you {hint hint ;-)