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for WACK! Caught!

by TornEmpathy

person apassino
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was really getting into this story until it stopped all of a sudden! Are you going to finish?

Amiti
person u dont need to know
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person akumu
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O...you know, i think it counts as cruel and unuasal punishment to leave a 1-shot like that... lol, very good but it doesnt quite seem like it should end yet.
person lacy
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm not much difference with or without the demon in him is he?

*dies giggling*
person Inugoku
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Hillarious! Write another chapter, this time make it Kagome or Inu!
person Laura
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, veot. ot. Too bad it ended (Not too big a fan of the ending), but the rest is very fun and amusing.
person Naheta
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST KEEP GOING !!!!!!!!!! LOL it is great you have a wonderful pov!!!! please keep writting on this one



Naheta
person KagomeReborn
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ugh, that was good, but i hate it when i'm on the end of a clify, are ya going write more . well check out my flics it ya get a chance a keep writing ^_^
person hakuryuu
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wai!!! that's sooo cute and funny!!! I love it! It's a very nice one-shot, but also has potential for a sequal and I really like your writing style!
person Cat
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool!
Can you do one with Inu and Kagome?