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It's called spelling. You might want to learn that, Oh, and all those a/ns all over the place really gets annoying. If you're going to post a fan fic, why don't you try not being such a fucking idiot about it.

hey, i said i cant spell and i meant it. come on we all have some thing we're not good at. and fuck you i can write the a/n in my story if i want to. some people like them and think their funny. im not talking to u LadySesshou i love your stories. k thanks for reading.

never really could.....but i might like you better if you checked out my flic close encounters, or paradise hotel^_^ **nug**

*shrug* Most writers who need help, want help. I merely gave you some advice on how to improve your writing. No one can or will force you to take the advice; I certainly won't. I understand that you are most likely young, and therefore a bit edgy when you receive a real review. That is normal. After you've been writing longer, however, you will grow to appreciate the reviews that don't say "OMG THiS IS GR8!!!!111" The reviewers who actually say something are the most honest, and one day, you will ize ize that.

You have an interesting idea. What you do with it is, as always, your choice.

Hello, I started your fic but ,I didn't get a chance to read all of it. I won't be as cold as some about your writing ,but I will say it it would be a good idea to find someone to review your work prior to posting. Don't be too hard on yourself or take others words to heart. We are all amatures here on this site unless someone has a pulitzer that the rest of us no nothing about ,but than that's another story all together. If you enjoy writing than do your thing, and continue to do so. I mean I have yet to meet a person who doesn't need some improvement, although some may think they don't. Hell even I can use the work my punctuation sucks. LOL Anywyas practice makes perfect, so just keep writing and believe me eventually everything will flow naturally.

OK, I LISTENED SO HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER!

i hate you, and i'm going to continue hating you till you update....just thought you should know that...

How did sesshomaru go through the well!?!?!?! please tell me!!!!!!!!! love the story, please continue!!!!!!!

im good

I loved it!!
Hurry up and Update!