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for the love never could be

by DarkBreed

person Alexis
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is da Bomb man I can't waite tell you finish!!!!!!!!
person Amreld
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Sesshy used a Kouga line! ^-^ "My woman" Funny! And I always find it hilarious that the calm cold-hearted sesshoumaru can swear up a storm! WAHOOOO!!!!
person Starr
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey girl,look dontu have any lemons?*put on puppy dog face*please.any way good stsaorylove yaStarr
person Youkai Yume
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, this is really good! I can't wait for you to continue it! Update soon! Damn I hate cliffies...

~Yume-chan
person MidnightTimberWolf
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story..... I hope you continue to update it.......lovelove a good Inu/Kikyou bashing.... It's good for the soul......
person Me
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i hope you liked that i had alot of school work to do. but i stayed up until 2:00 last night and stared to type on my frozen heart and then typed on this. hope your happy. a hint for chapter 5. Inu-Yasha finds out the truth about his brother.
person nightmareofcat
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it please update soon and by the way i thought sesshoumaru was spelled with a lower case "m" and not an upper case "oh woh well ignore me nice story anyway
person watergoddesskasey
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good
person dc2048
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just so that you know, I really enjoy this story and looking forward for the next chapter. I would also like to say that any good reader can look past bad grammer and spelling. This is not for a grade in any class, but a way to express yourself and tell a story.
person Disturbed Demon Gurl
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well that was an interesting fic so far. I like the idea that you got going on in your story and I love it very much
It's just that I think that maybe you should look into the gang a little more after that chapter because now that
Inuyasha know's Sesshoumaru has Kagome I don't think that he will just sit around, after all you did make him love her
in this story. But That is up to you and well it would seem a little weird if Inu is looking for kagome and know's that Sesshoumaru
has her, and He never shows up to try and get her back. But hey that is up to you I like the story so far and how it's going and
I hope that you continue to read my story 'Unseen Love' ok well gots to go. - Disturbed Demon Gurl AKA - Devil