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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Outer Inugoku: *blankly* That's it?
Inner Inugoku: What the f? I thought Kagome and Naraku were gonna get together!
*Inner and Outer parade around with signs that say*
KAGOME AND NARAKU 4-EVER!!
Inner Inugoku: What the f? I thought Kagome and Naraku were gonna get together!
*Inner and Outer parade around with signs that say*
KAGOME AND NARAKU 4-EVER!!
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story you have here, i just love the Kagome and Naraku pairings, although i did find him strangely OOC, but it was in a good way. H so so sweet and his words are so well written. Hope Kagome won't fall that easily for him, for that would be OOC definitely. Unless she's under his spell. Love it and Inu Yasha is still the same dude as ever perhaps a bit colder though.
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story even though this wasn't a lemon you redeemed Inu Yasha as the hero even though i would have liked to see more action here.
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, your good, you let us think that it was going to be and nar/kag flic and then landed to boom right at the end , supurvely done, please tell threre's going to be a sequel ???
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this keep going.
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
one more thing I was wondering how you were going to work around Naraku's problem he has on the first of each month.
( no not the bill collectors) his other problem. I mean it's one thing to turn into a human but a whole other to turn into a pile of slimy demon body parts. Hmmmmmmmmm...imagine stumbling on to that scene. second thought don't . TEE......TEE ^ ^ Not so sure love would conquer all in that instance. ^ ^
( no not the bill collectors) his other problem. I mean it's one thing to turn into a human but a whole other to turn into a pile of slimy demon body parts. Hmmmmmmmmm...imagine stumbling on to that scene. second thought don't . TEE......TEE ^ ^ Not so sure love would conquer all in that instance. ^ ^
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ERRR I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU
I THOUGHT IT WAS GOING TO BE A NARAKU AND KAGOME FIC
YOU TURN DOWNED MY HOPES *CRIES*
STUPID INUYASHA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*VERY ED*
I THOUGHT IT WAS GOING TO BE A NARAKU AND KAGOME FIC
YOU TURN DOWNED MY HOPES *CRIES*
STUPID INUYASHA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*VERY ED*
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THE STORY I MUST HAVE A SEQUEL!
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was very good! I'm glad that Inuyasha told Kagome the truth, and I'm even more glad that she believed him. Your writing is impressive. Your descriptions are thorough, and I believe that you captured the actual feelings of the characters accurately. I wouldn't be a bit surprised if Inuyasha really did consider Kagome his mate (he does treat her as such), and is just waiting for the chaos of their quest to come to an end before making it official. He probably does expect her to just understand his feelings antiontions, as you said. I really enjoyed this story! Perhaps in the future you may consider doing a sequal?
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was a very beautiful story. i really wanted kagome to end with naraku, but in the end she chose inuyasha. she's a brave one. i would have just made up my mind not to feel such kind of love at all. cause love, it's just too damn confusing and annoying. Naraku is so hot..........what i would i give to follow him. i wouldn't fall in love with him but being evil rocks.
is it me or does the foreplay scene between naraku and kagome seem more romantic than any scene between kagome and inuyasha could be. it was like a soft orchestral concerto or something. so slow, hot, and sensual. i'm gonna shut up now. KEEP UPDATING. and keep on trucking.
is it me or does the foreplay scene between naraku and kagome seem more romantic than any scene between kagome and inuyasha could be. it was like a soft orchestral concerto or something. so slow, hot, and sensual. i'm gonna shut up now. KEEP UPDATING. and keep on trucking.