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for Desire

by Miss

person songkiya
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_ this is great so far, update soon, it's realy interesting _^
person Sorrow
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
eee whats happening so write more please
person RekkaShinen
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested....VERY!!!!! Please update!!!! Onegai!!!! I'm begging you to!!!!!!!!!!
person aleaha
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*growls, grumples, mumbles, general fit through activitys* that cliff sure is a bitch, I can't wait for you to write more.
person Mariya
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool write more, is he under a spell?
person Zinidy
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... sounds good so far!
please write more!
person Sorrow
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
eep you have to write more please come on write more
person Jumbo_Shrimps
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY COUSIN! Nice lil short you made there. Pretty eye catching anamatamatic. Keep working hard on the FF and you'll be the best. Hehe. Til next .
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~Sara~
person Shinokun
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm this is interesting. keep it coming
person Hentai Jane
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story was VERY interesting but so is your pen name!:) LOL Anyway, this was a great beginning and I will be patiently waiting for ch. 2!