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by ScarletRaven

person Elf From Space
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice! smoothly written lemon. Is one of your other two chapters a Miro/Sang lemon and will you please post it? Do post the rest whatever it is, but I wanna know what's going on in the other cabin too! ^_^
person JL417
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was awsome. PLs continue posting.......
person bulk
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Cool. Keep this up. You said you have 3 chaps already, right?
person raven
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh please do a s/m lemon. it would so finish off the story perfectly
person RekkaShinen
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* That was a good fic. You made it easy for the reader to understand, good flow. *too tired to be funny tonight* I would absolutely love to read some more. Please post!!! Onegai!!!!!!!!!
person Tempest
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. I enjoyed ever minute of it. You have great imagery and a very well thought out writing style. I look forward to reading more.
person littledarkone13
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey this is good keep writing :)
person Luxurious_C
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so good. It almost made me . . . Nevend. nd.
The point is, that was a good!
what am I saying that was great!
More please.
person kagomerebo .
schedule December 25, 1919 at 12:00 AM
omg , i didn't see it coming, i'm speechles, all i can say is write more, quickly, and check out my flics if you get a chance cuase when i'm not reading this that's what i'm goin to be doin