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by ScarletRaven

person drake220
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::gasp of horror:: no kikyo! don't do it!!!! ahh!! so nervous! i really like this fic. i expected it to be a pathetic fic of the 'get-screwed-quick' variety but you absolutely passed my expectations by a couple thousand miles. kudos on mrs.higurashi's reaction! people usually have her babbling about ear warmers or how happy she is and its so unrealistic, it annoys me. personally, i think she even calmed down a bit too quickly but for the sake of plottime, its understandable. oh, and in chp4? you call inu a 'doggybag' or a 'doggy bog'. i laughed very hard,even if as aas a typo. great fic with luscious lemons. update asap!
person Kaye
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wait, did Kikyo block off the well? I know she wasn't just standing there. Guess we will have to see next chapter. And I did like Kagome's mother's reaction. It was a very true one. Loved the chapter. I hope you update soon!
person 00shizukanayami00
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEE!!!! YOU UPDATEEEED!!!!! :: glomp glomp glomp :: AAAAH THANK YOU THANK YOU THAAANK YOU!!!! And I luuuuurve it. And you must update again!
person drake220
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
usually, i only review at the end of the last chapter posted but i simply had to write because that last line was so fabulous, it deserves a review on its own. not as vocal as miroku....! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! i snort with laughter (and yes, thats a good thing)
person Marlingrl
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon! I really like this story and I want to see how you're gonna develop the plot.
person Wendy
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay....i am soo too old for this anime stuff but my friend got me hooked.....but i totally loved your feverish story...i've only read the first chapter granted.....but some times you just have to get some good lemony sex scenes and yours was pretty good....i'm off to read the next chapters....i'll let you know
person ???
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE??
person comicfancat
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review between chapters but I wanted to see what was going to happen.
I like your story alot.It's nice to see Kag and Inu,and Songo and Miroku get together
even if it was Shippo's mistake to cause it.I can't wait to see what happens next, either
with Kikyou or the gang.
person fan
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great story, great chappy, can't wait till you update and i hope that won't be too long so updaoon oon please, please, please!
person MaliceMizer
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story! (( sorry if the typing is sloppy...sprained finger and cant type well)) I have read it many times over and i just realized i forgot to review!!! i hope kee keep goin...but i guess not...oh well love it lots!