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Grrr... why did you have to go so slow... i was getting really into the story, now, its put on pause..... ~sits in a corner and cries all alone~
Plz hurry.. I want to see how it turns out ;_;

INSPIRED!!!!!!! i LOVED this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i only just discovered it this afternoon (along with this site as a whole) adn i've been reading it straight! it is now 10:57 pm adn i have not eaten supper yet and guess what? I'm not even hungry! i'm getting sustenance through your story via osmosis!! the plot was interesting (even if the name of the country was cheesy), the characters well done, the dialouge engaging and humorous, the descriptions were great, you didn't skimp on details in any scene (halajiuah!!!!), the little understatments were great ("miroku was rather relieved to hear Sango was ok"- hehe!!!!). Plus, you balanced the fluff and the angst very well, the battle scenes were actually understandable (miracle!!), your cliffhangers were nail-biters- ooh! especially that last when miroku swallowed sango- brilliant that piece! i swear, thats the first time i've seen that done! very very impressive. And best of all- you didn't rush things!!!!! you let the story unfold as it should, you let your characters choose their own pace! bless you for that!
huzzah for you!!!!!!! huzzah a thousand times over! ::plate of doughnuts:: (much bigger compliment then mere cookies) why WHY herehere no freakin' add this author/storry to your favorites list? b/c, you are definitly going on mine!! very much looking foward to the next chapter. PLEASE update soon!!
BTB, the lemon? ::wipes off sweat:: whoo-boy! i got to hand it to you, sexiest lemon i've ever read. very nicely done without getting disgustingly smutty. two thumbs way way up. if they ever have a contest like the one on that banner, you should definitly enroll that scene. it would win, or at least be way up there in the ranks

that was teh testtest scene...they should make a movie with that plot. i think its a girl thing to think that is it the sweetest scene. shoot who doesn't want some guy to reveal his feeling slike that then get kissed in the rain. beautiful work!

how sweet can inuyasha be? this chapter makes me want to fall in love and have someone say those things to me. don't be soo sad about your bf leaving. maybe u can go live with him...like the chapter said...u will always have memories to look back on.

IIIII WUUUVVVEEEE (wuve/love) IT................................................................plze make me a buddy at my im (instant messenger) its whiteanglechi
member cuz i live in hawaii my times r different.....

omg.. is so sad.. plz update soon.. i hope nothing happened 2 sango.. n i can't wait 2 read ur lemon in ur epilogue ^^ cya l8tr hun.

luv pet-chan

He didn't just dat dat did he? Oh god he didn't do that? Anyway, did Miroku mean on instinct the energy flows because if so then shouldn't Inuyasha not been able to make love to her? Really good chapter!

weee is me again.. i just read ur latest chapter.. it was so sad... made me cry 7__7.. anywayz plz email me when u update! Thank you!

It's all happy! Kouga was actually good, well you know what I mean. I really liked this chpater, and it did make up for the last one. Really good!

Inuyasha, you need to be lectured. Just because she lied about one thing, well alright but argh. I can't even think straight. Update whenever.