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by ElfFromSpace

person Aria Elan
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was hilarious. It's about time Sango got her own back on Miroku. ^_~ And I love seeing how the RP was expanded to create this story! There were just so many points where I was snickering or laughing out loud, such as at the Count Naraku reference, and Miroku feeling like a male preying mantis. You have a real knack for writing humorouemonemony stories, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. ^_^
person steph
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally you got it done! Maybe you've told me that you got it done and I forgot...oh well, at any rate I finally got to read it. Well-done...I love the dialogue bits, like Sango: "Rape?! I'll show you rape! It's not rape if you participate." Horribly wrong but oh so funny when taken in context.
person GoukanoMegami
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HA! I remember the two ku ku ku thingy! Count Naraku! LOL wasn't that in an RP/ chat situn thn that that was born? LOL. Either way, i think I remember reading something or even seeing a fanart about that on the ecchi mailing lists. cute story too. Naughty Kirara! LOL That happened to me once. While I was, *ahem* invovled, the cat Jumped up onto the bed and started rubbing against us wanting to be petted! LOL.
person RnH
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this finally up -- I really like it!
person Mystic
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*falls ofair air in a fit a laughter* teehee, i really like this story! Keep it up, your doing a wonderful thing!
person You Know Who
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::takes notes for the upcoming convention:: Funny story. Miroku was very entertaining and you wrote him well! Bravo!
person Eloy Brightdreamer
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah!! Elf! I love it! This is awesome. And I definitely see the influence of the RP group! (Two! Ku Ku Ku... I about died.) And Mush as a spectator sport... I've gotta remember that one. ^_^
person Sango-sama
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Hooray for Miroku torment. Hooray for smut! It really did make my day. ^__^ Fairly in character, which is definitely good as far as lemons go. And like your others fics, it has great, vivid imagery. *dances* Plus, Sango ripped off Miroku's robes...what is not to love about that? ^_-
person ceramicprincess
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bahh I'm too lazy to sign in. So Hi Ya!! I love you. This is wonderful, as usual. Man, I was laughing out loud and my mom was looking at me like I was an idiot. This has to be my favorite part:

Inu Yasha wondered how a youkai had managed to attack them right after he and Kagome had dragged Shippou away from the clearing without him being able to smell it coming.

Inuyasha you dumby. lol. Well, that and the end "Ack you pervert!" You write beautifully, as always. Keep up the good work!! I love you!
~Rachel
person sesshylover1
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
XD that was huliarious!!!!!!! XD please continue the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!