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person quoi
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha this was great
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job ....
person laughing
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA this was sooooooooo funny!!! omg i hope you write more really soon cant waite to see just what happens to our previrted monk hahahahah UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON OR ELSE lol
person inuficcrzy
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was so funny! hot, but funny!
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FREAKIN' GAWD! I absolutely loved it! Please, please tell me you guys have more? I must have more! I lauhged through both chapters and nearly fell out my chair doing so! I can't believe how funny this was! Oh my! Please tell me you have more! I have to have more of it! O.o! Oops! *^_^* That sounded a bit dirty! Heh heh...Ayhoo, I say more is better! This one is definitely worth bookmarking, you don't know how this helped me...Seriously...I was in a downward spiral of depression( the kind that just makes you sad for no damn reason ), I am so glad I found this! It made me feel sssssooooooooooo much better! ^_^ Really! Good job to everyone involved! ;-)
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Great story! I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. I'd really love to see a parallel story in which Inuyasha and Kagome get caught up in the same/similar situation. That's be just as great. Thanks for such a great read!
person Laura
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really fun and unexpected.
person Catie
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*dies giggling* That is so cute. And so true to characters. Bravo... ^_^x'
person hakuryuu
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!! I really liked the fact that Miroku was a virgin, and that Sango was in a lot of control... ;) very nice!!!
person kayak
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It's very funny and I never get tired of reading it.