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by ldkelly

person kei
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yours is a truly wonderful story! I've never read one with this plot before and I've read dozens ^_^ I think you should keep up the romance because Inuyasha and Kagome, Sango and Miroku all deserve it after the hell they've gone through, but a lemon in it with lots of sweetness and ...ok... hot stuff would be a great throw-in or ending. I'm looking forward to you next chapter

Kei .^_^.

P.s. Vacations are the spirits way of slowly torturing us with anticipation only to throw a rock on our heads. I've never had one that didn't go wrong somehow...^_~
person kagome
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
u should make it a lemon it would make the story go better
person hakuryuu
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think that you could (if you wanted) just leave the lemon out... but remember, this is AFF.net so... ^^ whatever you choose. Great fic, btw!!! :) I think you've stayed very IC ('cept for Inu-Yasha, but that doesn't count ^^) Keep it up!
person Roxotaku
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can't we have romance AND lemon? At this point I am just so hooked on the story I just WANT MORE! It is so very well written, a true pleasure to read. I think I have one of your other stories down in my recommended list.... Your writing is like an oasis in a desert on this site ^_^. Keep up the good work!
person Mija
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I luv romance but personally i really really love a good lemon..lol..soo theres my choice..would be interesting to have Kag and Inu together then when his mind finally returns see how they try to deal with it, already Kagome is wondering if his new affection for her will change once he gets his memory back, so it would be cool so see what happens if they actually make love..:-) ok im a perv so sue me..lol..luv the new chap cant wait till you update...:-)
person Tsunami
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *glomps the author* I wuv you! It's a great combination of a unique plotline and an interesting writing style that creates this wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person hakuryuu
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story... I'm just blown over by how well it's done!! I'm super glad Miroku didn't die... but I think that you might wanna keep to the injuries for some real fun and torture ;) I mean, I-Y just got a bunch of his memory erased... that's a bad injury, and for him to go *presumably* far in two days... ;) do you understand? Well... just an idea. And remember, have fun with them. And as a personal thing... ^^ MiroSan forever! Ooh don't forget about Shippou and Kirara too! :) keep going please!!!
person Mija
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh me like this story..(big smiles)...please update soon, want to know how Inu ended up in the desert and lost his memory and what exactly Naraku wants..is it Kagome or Inuyasha??? hmmmm please update soon..pretty please????
person Ruth Woytsek
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I don't understand why moreple ple haven't reviewed this, and it pisses me off. There's more to a story than just plain old sex, and it seems that people can't hack reading a story that isn't full of it. You have a couple of grammatical errors, but overall, this story is well-done. I'm hooked.
person Inugoku
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*is in mourning* Poor, poor Miroku...My Houshi is gone! Come back to me, my love!