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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It has the makings of a really great story you should add more chapters!
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent beginning! It leaves a multitude of possible scenarios that could be played out. So yes, I think you should most definitely continue this. I want to find out how Kagome and Inuyasha deal with the repercussions of that moment when Inuyasha's youkai blood dominatred his ability to reason. It should be entertaining!
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your mastery of the English language is pretty good, only a couple word confusions. Poor Kagome, I hope everything gets cleared up and for that to happen you must continue. Please update!
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i would like to know what happens next...please write the next chapter soon...oh yeah by the i liked it
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you should add more, anyway, it's was good
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a story that has possibilities this is a kind of havehavehave been looking for! i hope you continue it but don't totally turn this around. i have seen stories that start out like this and then we have a sweet and entirely cowed hanyou/ but that is not his personality and what gives inuyasha his appeal as well as sesshomaru is the wildness, the instincts, their inane cruelety and the occasional bout of sweetness gives us the attarction to their character.
good luck
good luck
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh You have to write more and you know it, COme on please write more
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is good! I so want to see an update! Kudos on the English by the way(I speak French originally)!
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, you've got me interested. Cant wait to read the rest of it!!!!
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was good, even if... Poor Kagome!! ç_ç Being raped is not something that you like... But, after all, she loves Inuyasha...
oticoticed a few grammar mistakes... for example: _She was being raped by his love._ .... ehm, shouldn't it be: She was being raped by HER love ?
However is a good chapter... I hope to read soon the next!
oticoticed a few grammar mistakes... for example: _She was being raped by his love._ .... ehm, shouldn't it be: She was being raped by HER love ?
However is a good chapter... I hope to read soon the next!