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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Write more, intresting that Kagome is always so clueless, huh?
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June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was good...better than good... but where's the rest of it?!?!?!? Well, stop rng tng this and get to writing :)
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you decided to continue this. Great morning after chapter. I enjoyed the horrified realization made by Kagome, it could have been preed bed by one little word. After all those times of throwing sits around, when she trully needed it, she forgot it. Priceless reaction! I'm excited to see where the next chapter takes us, so I hope you update soon!
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story so far! please update soon!
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! uh oh, and the troubles begin! Great chapter, keep them coming!
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oOOoooooooo.....MORE CHAPPIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! will sango be there? what will she say??? TELL ME... *sits on knees and begs* TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Blood Budan~
~Blood Budan~
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
She forgot hmm oh man you have to write more.
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. those two chapters are insanely good. i must say, though english is not your first language, and though you have a little trouble going between "he" "his" and "him" *and the same with the feminine* every so often, your grammar and word usis vis vastly above that of nearly every other author on this site (including those who speak english as their first language.)
i must say, you are really, very talented. please write more! i was so excited when i saw you had added! now alll you have to do is write more! (:
i must say, you are really, very talented. please write more! i was so excited when i saw you had added! now alll you have to do is write more! (:
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!! I hope you continue to update!!! Please update! ONEGAI!!!! You just had to leave us begging for more huh? *sigh* I hope you do update soon. I'd love to see what happens. So, good luck! Good writing! You can't really tell that English is your second language. I love your flare for capturing the reader to keep them reading!
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! It can't be, Inuyasha better apologize tr for for what he did.Poor Kagome I fell sorry for her. UPDATE!!!!!