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for Youkai lust

by Dariana

person richonyx
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was great! Love the beginning and the angst. Your grammar and everything are very good, especially since English isn't your first language, so no worries :). Hope you update soon!
person Jude
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0..0 you evil...how could you left it with such a cliffy end? *sniff* please update soon!


Ja!
Ofir
person Nunichan
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I started reading this when it got posted last year,and I liked it. It's sad and it made me angry,a little, but it's a good story. But, just try to update faster ne?
person Koniko-chan
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, I just wanted to let you know that I really enjpoied the story, (I'm sure I've read it before, so this may be a second review on it -_-;;; shrug) anyway, it is very well done and I hope to see more work on this one in the future ^_^ thank you

Koniko-chan
person akuma_river
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great story. Keep up the good work.
person enid
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lovin it!
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how could u end it like THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u cant just STOP...........*paces like mad* no..no...no! u need to finish it!! cant just stop there....u cant damn u!!
person Koniko
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inu and Poor Kag! you did very well on this! I really want to see more. please update soon.
person youkai tsuki
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo, cliffy's suck. I enjoyed the story, I'm not into the
NC sex but for this story it fits. I look forward to your
next chapter, Happy writing.


youkai tsuki
person InuyashasGurl008
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this is really interesting I hope Inuyasha shows up in time to save Kagomme! Ja Ne...^_^

~*InuyashasGurl008*~