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for Dirty Little Secret

by Carisa

person Danie
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well I still like it.. you kinda went a little fast there towards the end.. or.. well.. it seemed kinda rushed but other than that it was rather well done and I think you did really good but thats just my opinion.
person Hitomi
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
VERY good story, and also well written. It is becoming such a nail-biter now -- wow, it's so good! Though I feel bad for Sango - guilt complexes can really suck the fun out of life. *better stop now... starting to feel guilty for reading this in the first place... ;)*



person RavenShadow
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! I really need to know what is going to happpen next. Please, Please, pretty please update soon!
person aaÙ¦ a
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Shoots Kikyo dead...then hits Inu Yasha in the head with a cast iron frying pan, to erase his memory of Kikyo* *dusts hands off* Ok now that I've accomplished that.

Man this fic is getting all dramatic, I didn't expect it to take this turn. I love it and I can't wait for more. (Inu Yasha needs to be spanked too)
person Sorrow
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
eep oh no you got to write more
person ssjprincess
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. The angst ran abundant in this chapter, and I'm a big fan of the angsty romance fics. ^_^ Sango and Miroku are suffering the loss of one another, and Kagome is feeling the pain of knowing thnuyanuyasha is still thinking of Kikyou. Everyone's heart is breaking... hopefully they can find a way to express their feelings, and find a way to heal their hearts. Again, this was another great chapter, and I can't wait to see the direction you take next.

~**ssjprincess**~
person ills
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was the best, please contiune with it!
person Xander
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...!!! That is all I can say. Your story is awesome. At first I thought that it was all about lust and sex and I was like, "That's good." But now that I have continued to read it I know that it is filled with love and consequences; so now im like, "That's totally awesome." Well, thatnks for writting it and please put up the next chapters. I like that you aren't slow in putting up chapters. Thank you for the story, I absuloutly love it.

Sayonara ^_^
person RavenShadow
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and just keeps getting better. I usually review on ff but I just so happen to see it here and could not resist.Please post soon I really need to know what is going to happen.
person KagomeRain
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow i like your fic i have bben reading it on ffnet but came here today just because though tholehole sango miroku thing is awefully sadistic don't you think that atleast at one point miroku should have some preverbal "balls" and take control over sango for atleast one whole "ROMP" tee he he just a sugestion