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for Dirty Little Secret

by Carisa

person hakuryuu
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... sooo sad!!! I feel so bad for Miroku!!! anyway... keep it up! I want to know if there'll be more dreams, or if that's it... :)
person serena
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what the hell...no kagome with Inuyasha no one else..bitch what is wrong with you. This story was good until that last chapter..bitch your sick.
person Maerlyn
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First of all I just want to tell Serena to shut the hell up. It was a DREAM, okay? And it was Miroku's dream at that. Relax a little...

*cough*

That being said, I'm a little disappointed that this was another dream-ish chapter, just because I want some more of a progression in the "real life" happenings. I'm really interested and looking forward to reading how Kagome will react when she wakes up, and what Miroku will do. The suspense is killing me :)

Thank you for this chapter, and I hope I see the next one soon.
person Inugoku
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Outer Inugoku: Ewww, that's nasty! First, its girl/girl, then its a threesome! That is just plain nasty!!
Inner Inugoku: Hee hee, me no care! As long as they screw like bunnies, I be happy! On the other paw, it does get a little bit boring after them screwing so much!
person dbzobsessed
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was in tears at the end of this before I read the last portion...oh, that was cruel! But it was a wonderfully written chapter. So many emotions. But Sango and Miroku have to work things out. Also, I like your interpetation of Kikyo and her need for Inuyasha.
person bebejinx
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story. and because this was a dream i'm perfectly fine with all the OC sex stuff. i loved your last chapter inuyasha's dream mad gas gasp and almost cry at the end. i have a question has anyone realized that kagome's marked?
person Sei
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*laughs uncontrollably* When Kag and San were kissing, I knew it was Miroku's dream, but then when you brought Sesshoumaru into it, I nearly died laughing. Poor, poor, pooooor Miroku!

And for Inuyasha's dream, great writing. I love depressing stuff, it's so...real, I guess.
person GreaterBeast_Xellas
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
o_O THAT WAS GREAT.
person Inugoku
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, my sister would say it was stupid, but I on the other paw, think this is one of the best stories I have ever read! Very poignant. Please update soon!!!
person RavenShadow
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a really tragic and beautiful chapter. I hope InuYasha finally realize what he has and will be willing to hold on to it. I hope you update soon!