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for Dirty Little Secret

by Carisa

person Sutlesarcasm
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are so bad, you are so bad, bad, bad, bad! I don't think I've ever read a fic that made me smoke so many cigarettes in one reading. I can promise you that you aren't the only one who has had that though "I wonder if she get's off when she's riding him like that?" I know I would. Great fic. Write more.
person Crisi
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent story. It made me burst out laughing to many time and seemed to take on the characters perfectly, though with a bit of a twist. Keep writing fan fics please!
person Sandro666
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo And Ecore I say! Encore!
person hh
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice
person atsumi
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! wow was that amusing to read! ha ha ha i can see soooo many of those situations actually happeneing! lol wow. lol nice job! well written
person ShiroInu
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-applauds.- Wonderful.
person Shaid
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe I've got to say, I liked that. Cute and perverted but with nice serious undertones. And I completely understand the comment you made about needing to hug your husband after writing that one portion. There are times I ly wly wish my finace lived in the same time zone as I do, and some of them deffinately are directly related to my writing.

But either way, it was cute and I enjoyed it!!!

Shaid
person Tiranth
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was such an awesome story! I really enjoyed it. You made me cry on your dream sequences and I was so reliethatthat they were only dreams! Great job! Thank you for writing it!
person No One Knows
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING AWESOME KICK ASS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! One of the best Inuyasha lemons I have ever read! Perfect ending!
person k-chan
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awesome.