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for Dirty Little Secret

by Carisa

person BirdieBlythe
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I loooooooooooove this story. It's so hot and steamy. Mmmm i'm such a smut whore! ^^
person kittenclaws
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cried at the end of your story please make it a happy ending regardless it was beautiful but i am begging you please make it happy
person Shadowknight
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the more interesting IY stories I've read. Well done. What grammar/spelling errors there are in this are forgivable, due to the ebb and flow of the plot. The M/S pairing could have gone either way, due to their natures. This F/Dom, m/sub worked in it's own way. If you decide to do a sequel, Sess/Kagura is the canon pairing that gets short shrift in fanfics.
person Amber
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im am in love with the sango and munks relationshiip. I cackled like a mad woman reading about it, I can compleatly see that happening!
person Amber
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear gods! You cant leave it like that!!!! I need to see how they react! *laughs unconrtoably* Your a wonderfull writer, I salut you.
person Amber
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear gods! You cant leave it like that!!!! I need to see how they react! *laughs unconrtoably* Your a wonderfull writer, I salut you.
person nutterbutter
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!! I loved it! You are a really talented author! Your transitions between POVs were really natural, and the writing itself is superb! Loved the ending too :) Made me laugh. Keep writing, you're so good at it!
person Princess
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMFAO!!! That was brilliant!!! LMFAO!!! I love the sequel, too!!! ROFL!!!
person The Nerd
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! my friend printed it out, and after i read it, i just had to find the story to see the whole thing. i'm glad i did!
person Deep serenity
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
read the whole thing, and it started off rough(to me) but quickly become better, then great! LOL LOVED the sango and miroku parts, I can so see that!!!

good job, as I said the story line got better with each chapter and so did your writing.