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for Dirty Little Secret

by Carisa

person Izzy
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was a very sweet chapter, must write more.
person aleaha
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kikyo must die, that is the only sulution I can see (or maybe its just cause I love it when the bitch bites it) I can't wait for more...
person ssjprincess
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An outstanding chapter! You did an excelljob job with this one! I enjoyed the svene in which they were speaking through the door to one another. It was so bittert. It. It seemed as if the were intuned to one another. *sigh* Great job!
And the lemon! Wow! It was great. When they were staring into each others eyes, as if reading the very depths of the others soul, and knowing what trully lay there... wonderful! I was impressed with the skill you used on this chapter, I think it was one of the best thus far!

I hope you get the next chapter of this story up soon! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I'm hooked!

~**ssjprincess**~
person AnimeGoddess
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW......... just WOW. that..... was ........... great. One of your best chap yet yet. keep up the good work.


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person Danie
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this.. I think it was interesting the way you twisted around Miroku's odd penchant for inciting Sango's anat fat feeling her up.. in any case I found this to be very nicely done.. not PWP or anything like that and I think you did nicely all around and I do appriciate you writing this as it kept my attention til I got to the end and I think the next chapter should be just as interesting as the last few were ^^ thanks again for the nice story and Ill be looking for more later
person Maerlyn
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this latest chapter (5) was great! Perfect mix of waff and passion. Now I'm really anxious to read the following chapters. I hope you update soon ^_^
person Laura
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting theory on Miroku. Also I like that you don't make Kagome totally submit to Inuyasha and do everything he says, cause well, she doesn't, it's not in character.
person nightmareofcat
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update soon,if not for the readers then for the people out thair who have dirty little secrets.
person ssjprincess
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Elentlent story! It's interesting how Kagome and Inuyasha, as well as Miroku and Sango, have dirty little secrets. Who knew that Miroku enjoyed masochism? ~_^ I hope you update this soon, I'm interested in whats going to happen now that Kagome is aggrivated at Inuyasha and has decided to return home.
person Sei
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing style (^_^) I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next!