Jake's mom is a gift! LOL! Her escapades sound absolutely legendary! She's flown all over the world, seen, and done amazing things! I can see how Sesshoumaru would be enthralled by her.
I am happy that Usagi got to see the sword of heaven in action! It is a miraculous sight. glad Sesshoumaru explained the sword and It's properties to him. I wouldn't want him thinking that the sword could bring his parents back. They've been gone to long for that.
I feel InuYasha on the heartburn! My grandma and mom always said that heartburn during pregnancy was a sign that the baby was gonna have a FULL head of hair! Must be true in my case, because even though all my pregnancies differed in a lot of respects 1 thing was a constant. I had heartburn for every blessed one of them! LOL!
Thanks for putting that in there!
AWESOMENESS ACHIEVED!
B reading U!
Whoa! InuYasha in command! The festival is in very good hands! It sounds like it will be a smashing success!
I feel for Usagi! Poor little guy. However, he's blessed to have Kenichi now. Taking him to the temple was a great idea. Lay your troubles at the altar, and let the Lord do his work.
​​​​Shippo's little girl is growing up! How sweet! Yeah I is a good boy, but I do think a little talk is in order. LOL!
​​​​​​Nicely done!
B reading U!
​​​​​​My goodness! It was an honor to read this! It was awesome to see InuYasha and Sesshoumaru have that moment together. Talks at bedtime when the house has quieted down for the night, are the best! That's when my hubby and I have our best conversations. We talk about us as a family, and our plans, what we think about certain situations. About how the kids and grandbabies are doing. What plans we should make for them. We talk about what we're going to be doing there next day. What needs to be done. We talk, period. No interruptions from outside or no mommy I can I, or daddy I need. LOL! !
Crazy thing about this chapter. Sesshoumaru has been reading this book for the LONGEST, trying to figure out IF InuYasha can or IS pregnant. He's been sort of agonizing over it, only to have InuYasha come to him wondering sort of the same thing. And seeming to be okay with it! LOL! That stuck me as hilarious! InuYasha having dreams of their first child, while Sesshoumaru has been stressing over and doing research on the very idea! CLASSIC!
I'm over the moon about the love scene! The red pen worked! LOL! It started out well, then I saw where you started to rush it a bit. Then happiness resumed, because I saw that you caught it and slowed it down. YAY and Kudos to you for a job well done! You put the fire and passion back were it needed to be! I'm off to the next chapter soon!
AWESOMENESS WELL ACHIEVED!
B reading U!
​​​​​​My goodness! It was an honor to read this! It was awesome to see InuYasha and Sesshoumaru have that moment together. Talks at bedtime when the house has quieted down for the night, are the best! That's when my hubby and I have our best conversations. We talk about us as a family, and our plans, what we think about certain situations. About how the kids and grandbabies are doing. What plans we should make for them. We talk about what we're going to be doing there next day. What needs to be done. We talk, period. No interruptions from outside or no mommy I can I, or daddy I need. LOL! !
Crazy thing about this chapter. Sesshoumaru has been reading this book for the LONGEST, trying to figure out IF InuYasha can or IS pregnant. He's been sort of agonizing over it, only to have InuYasha come to him wondering sort of the same thing. And seeming to be okay with it! LOL! That stuck me as hilarious! InuYasha having dreams of their first child, while Sesshoumaru has been stressing over and doing research on the very idea! CLASSIC!
I'm over the moon about the love scene! The red pen worked! LOL! It started out well, then I saw where you started to rush it a bit. Then happiness resumed, because I saw that you caught it and slowed it down. YAY and Kudos to you for a job well done! You put the fire and passion back were it needed to be! I'm off to the next chapter soon!
AWESOMENESS WELL ACHIEVED!
B reading U!
Oh, I was hoping to see the gent or healer! He was such a sweet soul! Maybe he could shed some light for Sesshoumaru, and help him figure out IF InuYasha is pregnant. Although, I feel that Sesshoumaru already knows the answer, confirmation is what's needed at this point! Jininji (sp?) DOES help Sesshoumaru chronicle InuYasha pregnancy and the birth of Keiko!
Cream Ice! LOL! Sesshoumaru's first taste of ice cream reminded me of my kids. Especially, my little Javier! He's the baby of the family. I have him a tiny taste on the tip of my spoon when he was 7 months old. Next thing I knew, he stuck his whole head in my bowl! He had ice cream ALL OVER HIM! LOL!
AWESOMENESS ACHIEVED!
B reading U!
Great chapter! I see InuYasha's starting to show outward signs of his condition. Irritability! Any slight, no matter how insignificant it is, could see him off! LOL! To be totally honest, I DON'T miss those days. My hubby is a saint! When I think about all the crap I put him through, it's a wonder we made it! LOL!
I'm happy Kenichi adopted Usagi. Now either will be alone ever again!
Well done!
B reading U!
​​​​
Hey there! Another great chapter! It is amazing to get a look as to how their mating has changed not only their lives, but the lives of the castle and town as a whole! InuYasha introducing indoor plumbing to the kitchen, connecting it to the main building, adding storage space and break rooms. Signs of movement into the modern world!
​You showcased more of InuYasha's transformation as a Lord and leader, while never losing his nurturing side. His advice to Shippo in handling his wife's fears, should be a great help to the fox. Maybe he'll get her and the kids to the festival. So grandpa Inu can spoil themthem! LOL! It's awesome to have grandkids! LOL! I love it! I have 6, and my hubby and I go crazy when they come! LOL! Best part, we get to send their hyper asses back home at the end of the day, so our kids can have fun trying to calm them down!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!
I'm off to the next chapter! So excited that you posted 2 @ 1 time! I'm a happy camper!
B reading U!
I must have been asleep to have missed this! Usagi. That's Sailor Moon's real name, isn't it? I'm the original Japanese version, right? Bunny is the bunny's name! LOL! I love it!
But, in all seriousness though, Usagi's story is a sad one. The boy was so eaten up by guilt for living, while his family died. It's called Survivors Remorse. I learned about that in my Psych classes in college. A person falls into the 'why me?' state of mind. Why did I live, while others died? Why was MY life spared? That is an extremely crushing thought, especially for one so young. However, I think Usagi doesn't realize that it was his father's wish and hope that his son lives on. That was his father's last and greatest gift. Find a life for yourself, ours is done here. But, you must live on! Isn't that truly what a parent does? Look out for and protect our children from any conceivable harm? Usagi's family went to their deaths knowing that he would be safe. I think Kenichi is the best person to show him that. InuYasha is a good source to asset as well! He's been in the same boat himself, so I think Usagi will be fine. He just has to get over seeing Sesshoumaru's terrifying display. Sesshoumaru in defense mode not a look you want to be on the end of! LOL!
AWESOMENESS ACHIEVED!
B reading U!
It's just amazes me how intricate you've made InuYasha. How smoothly he is in his role as Co-Lord of the West. Although, I'm not surprised about his abilities. InuYasha could NEVER be called dumb! His mother was a princess, and royal blood flows through his veins from all sides. So it would stand to reason that he would know how to act in court. His ideas on the refugee situation are on point! Sesshoumaru will be proud of all his ideas.
The point about InuYasha and Jaken becoming good friends was a nice twist. But then again, Jaken really didn't have a reason for animosity towards InuYasha. He was only following Sesshoumaru's lead. If Sesshoumaru hated hanyous and humans, he would too. Out of solidarity and loyalty for his Lord.
BokusenO didn't know! Wow, that was a shock! The 3-4000 year old magnolia tree didn't know anything about inu knotting!? I guess Lord Inu No Taisho didn't think it was necessary to tell him about it. It wasn't like he knew he would not live to see both his boys grow up, so he could advise them his self.
Great chapter! Sesshoumaru is coming closer to the answer he's looking for. I'm so curious how InuYasha's gonna feel WHEN HE finds out he's pregnant! Now, the reaction must be EPIC! LOL!
B reading U!
This was one of the best chapters of this story! We get to see InuYasha take on a more assertive role as second Lord of the West! He showed the counsel that he is able to hold his own in a meeting, and has knowledge that is EXTREMELY important for the fastly approaching future.
I can't wait to see how they put InuYasha's plans to work! His thought to make the town into somewhat of a maze was awesome. It's a wonder Sesshoumaru hadn't thought of it first. But, he relied upon his strength and wits more than InuYasha had. So, I guess he could overlook somethings.
Can't wait to see the situation with the bugs handled. There's an unseen enemy out there that needs to be crushed! LOL!
AMAZING JOB!
B reading U!