I've found it again! I'm so very happy you've decided to get back into it! This has several more chapters than I remember, and there's more smut too! I do so very much love me some SessKag fics and your writing has inproved greatly. Thanks for the shout out, btw. Very humbling. Like, senpai noticed me!
I'm also excited to see how you move forward with their relationship. I hope it gets steamier. Like sparring sex, oo, oo, shower sex! OH OH OH SPARRING SEX AND -THEN- SHOWER SEX!
Oh, something im confused about, but may have just read wrong: did Sesshomaru kiss her in front of his crew? That happened? When he was assigning Kags a bodyguard. Just wanna know what his level of dgaf is (usually zero, but still).
Er mah gerd, please update soon. Im dying for more. I literally check every day. Its just a tab i keep open and when ever i open my internet (every day, naturally) i refresh the page. I hope you know how good your writing is.
This is a good story but I am a little mad that the information is longer than the chapters. Make the chapter longer please.
even though it was a short chapter it was very good putting sango into the mix and both of them going to the same place makes you excited for more of the story krrp the chapters coming
Okay, im back, morning after i finished whats here. I am really impressed with the quality of your writing, and your ability to build worlds. As a fellow writer i understand the challenges.
I am really enjoying the parallels youve formed, woth Cuei and Sessh's demon. I like that youve made him fundamentally flawed, with the drug abuse/use and hyper aggression. Im loving the chemistry between Kagome and Sesshomaru, all Vesuvian and shit. I like that while he acquiesces to her, but its not willow-y.
Im very excited to see where the powers go and how they affect each other. Its exciting, and while i know youre busy, im very reafy for the next installment.
Hmu btw, if you'd like a beta, cause ive seen some super petty mistakes. Stupid things for me to point out, like just missing words. I can easily flow through it, but others might not. Idk, lmk, and i suppose youd have to care lol. Theres that too.
Low key, your writing is so good that you dont need to care what we think.
Funny thing is that the 21st chapter was uploaded while i was reading the 20th and at some point during the chapter i set my phone down. It reloaded the page and there was a 21dt chapter lol
Okay, first, when i find a story i like, i hardly ever comment until i run out of stuff to read. This first chapter is so enjoyable, that i am in fact going to review. I really like the space theme. Wasnt sure i was gonna like it, but im loving it. Really hoping she and Sota have some kind of cool powers.
I haven’t written before but just wanted to let you know that I’m really enjoying this story. It’s very creative and more than I expected at first. Keep up the good work!
I think you are handling the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome really well. Instant attraction is used a lot in fanfics just as an excuse to introduce smut, but your rendition is extremely believable and natural. I'm always checking back to see if the new chapter has been posted!
Sounds like this is a rough time for you, but I hope that writing helps soothe all those emotions. Greif is exhausting though so take care of yourself!
Please update soon! Love this story and soo ready for the smut chapter!
What an exelent story!
it took me a few chapters to decide what I thought, but I am enjoying every minute now that the framework has been set.
Well done. I look forward to more.