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for The Shoot

by Dunkelgelb

schedule January 17, 2022 at 12:00 AM

wow, this is just the hotest fic i have read in a while. and omg, the longest lemon i have read it seems like. It just never ends which i'm happy for, but damn!. god it is so hot! I'm craving some more. I wonder what would happen if the girls just said forget it and not wear the sutras, what would sesshomaru do then? rejoice? panic? Please update again soon.

 

schedule December 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

From his perspective, whatever administrator/deity administered the nature of the institution of sex on planet Earth was clearly spamming the ‘Bless Sesshomaru’ key on whatever terminal in Heaven he/she/they/it were using at that moment.

OH GOD MY SIDES ARE KILLING ME

person Lyn
schedule June 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I really love  this fic and i hope you continue on with it. I wont lie  SessXSango is the pairing I love thee most even though it's a rather odd one so I really cant wait for  the nect chapter. And don't get me wrong, all of the story is hot, the KagomeXsess and KikypXsess too. please keep up the amazing story <3

person skyrere
schedule March 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM

OH my...

oh MY!!!

OOOH MAMA!!!

it's been a long time since a story could turn me on...

damn fine job my dear.  damn fine job.

person Tenzi Northwind
schedule March 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful story.  Great to get lost in the story only to be reminded that it is a story within another.  Powerful imagery.  I truely hope more is cuming!

person Hattaru
schedule February 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I must say very interesting and creative, I love it I can t wait to read more and for you to update chapter 4. this story is amazing and very different.😄😆☺☺