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for The Best Things Come in Two

by Azure.Zink

person Kit-kit
schedule April 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter, I'm happy to see that you are back. I wonder how things will be now that the girls mothers are back.  Thou the shikon jewel is the only thing keeping them alive. 

schedule November 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh goodness... What a place to stop!! Sorry to hear about you losing all of your fics... I would be devastated if it happened to me!! Thank you for being strong enough to not allow it to break you!!

schedule November 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

OMG... Writer! What are you trying to do to my fragile mind?? You have me over here flipping my brain inside and back outside again and again!! I believe you did this to me in your last fiction too! Is it on purpose? Picking ONE thing, and writing 2 opposing FACTS throughout the story.. So opposing that we can't made heads or tales about the FACTS at all?? I really want to know now that it is such a glaring contrast... Is Kiki InuYasha's Blood Daughter or not???? In the Ice cream parlour, you said InuYasha could see himself all in his daughter. He even mentioned I believe at the carnival that she has HIS ears. Then he finally opened up to Sessh about Kiki's mom... And flat out says she isn't his blood daughter. She has a disorder because he was trying to save her with his Youki and since he wasn't the bio father, it made her sick. Okay... IF InuYasha isn't Kiki's Bio dad... WHO is??? When did Kiki's mom get pregnant? It wasn't said that she was pregnant when you described how they got together after the orphanage... Did she CHEAT on InuYasha? Why was she blaming InuYasha for her pregnant aches an pains, threatening to make him pay by impregnating InuYasha if he ain't even the dad??? Please explain this conundrum of a "tangled web" PLEASE before I gouge my own EYES out!! It's been clawing ar me for hours!!! Thanks! 

schedule November 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

WONDERFULLY EXQUISITE!! I think I'm addicted to your style!!


ありがと  ã”ざいます

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 Arigato Gozaimasu

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schedule November 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

omg!!!! DAMN those paparazzi asses!!!"😡 ughh! They make me mad!! Other then that...this chapter is too adorable!! Just the potential love sparking is too sweet!!

person Kit-kit
schedule November 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter. I wonder why naruku hates sesshomaru so much. How will this turn out now that inuyasha is under his control

person Kit-kit
schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm so happy to read another chapter of this. I'm glad you are now back in action. I wonder what made naruku kill sai mother, and come after the little girl.

person Kit-kit
schedule September 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm dio happy to read a new chapter. I truly hope sesshonaru has everything under control and nothing has happened  

schedule August 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Omg THIS IS AMAZINGLY ADORABLE!  Thank you for bringing this fic into the world!!! I can't wait to see how their first time together goes! Good luck and keep going!

schedule June 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next one!