This story is adorable! I hope you come back and finish it soon. I'd hate to see another incomplete fanfic 😞
So I have been reading this since it came out, and I was really enjoying it but I just feel like it's getting a bit stale. I don't feel like there is any real story progression with chapter 11. Looking forward to more though.
Glad to see another update for this story. Keep 'em coming!
I wasn't expecting Sesshoumaru to show up either! But I like that he did, and the direction you went with it. I wonder if Kagome heard Inuyasha's proclamation that she'll be his wife when he's older. Probably not or you would've included her reaction. She thinks he still loves Kikyou, which really doesn't make sense after Kikyou did this to him, but whatever. Of course, even if she heard his child-self declare his "love" for her, that's because his child-self thinks Kikyou is the scary stinky lady. It's his adult-self she has her doubts about, and would probably just dismiss his childish declaration of love. Can't wait to see if he's got his adult mind in the morning and what his reaction will be to being at Sesshoumaru's camp, LOL. Keep up the awesome work!
This story is adorable. Please keep working on it.
Short yes, but also sweet. I was hoping Inuyasha would turn out to have secretly been awake and heard Kagome's confession of loving him, but I guess that wasn't the case since he started having a nightmare as his child-self again. Randomly switching back and forth must be disconcerting for him, but I think it's definitely a good sign that he switched back to his adult-self so quickly. Come on, Inuyasha, you can fight it!
This is too cute!! I came across this by accident and so glad I did! I hope you're going to finish it!
Quick but cute! I can't wait to see how well the potion works!
So glad to see another update from you, and I'm also glad to see that Myouga knew somebody who knew how to make a potion to help Inuyasha fight Kikyou's spell. Interesting to learn that the original nature of the spell was not to wipe his adult mind, and that that was an alteration Kikyou had made. Might be why, in part, Kagome's barrier was able to protect him from that part of it. She was able to block what Kikyou had done, but the older, original spell, was beyond Kagome's strength to protect him from. It's encouraging that he's had his adult mind two days in a row, now. If his nearness to Kagome is helping then she'll have to make a decision when it comes to school time. If she needs to return to her world then he'll just have to go with her. Being apart for just a few hours one day if she needs to take a test probably wouldn't hurt, so long as they still sleep next to each other that night. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses from here.
So glad to see you updating again! Yeah, the news is...depressing? Scary? Infuriating? But all the more reason, I think, for us fanfiction writers to keep pumping out the fiction. It's hard, I know, but our readers (which can include fellow writers like me!) are depending on us for these moments of distraction from the real world. This is a really cute story and I'd hate for you to just up and abandon it. Although congrats on working towards your GED! That is important. Good for you! Just don't let all the negativity of what's going on get you down. There's also a lot of positive moments out there that can give one a sense of hope and pride. Focus on the positives and persist!