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October 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to AFF! I like your story so far; hopefully Sesshomaru will end up giving Rin the business repeatedly before you're done. As far as "unwinding" from the tension built up between himself and Rin at the end of Chapter 2, perhaps he'll go looking for Kagura?
Some other thoughts: you have a more involved writing style than some new authors I've seen, which I think is good. Rather than post short, almost meaningless drabbles, you post big, long paragraphs. You also pay attention to the formatting, putting indentations at the beginning of most paragraphs. Your vocabulary is rather advanced and your spelling is also very good.
Nice work!