Wow. NIIICCEEEEEE.
I wasn't expecting that for the first chapter, but please keep it coming! (pun 50/50 intended lol)
LOVE the fact that you have Kagome sleeping secretly with all three of them. It makes it so interesting and suspenseful!
Can't wait to read more!
I would love to read more of this bt wouldn't he be able to smell his sons on her as they would smell him and each other or do they all know and she is the only one who doesn't ?
Great first chapter. Can't wait to see what becomes of this story. Looks super interesting and reads very well.
Updatee I like where this story is going!
Awesome!! i really liked it and i hope you keep going with this storie ^^
I can tell that this story will be pack with drama, drama, and drama! I love the idea of this story, and the lemon in the first chapter was hot!! Can't wait to read more!
Ok, so she's a straight up ho and liar! I always find the idea of them sharing ludicrous! They are extremely possessive! You just had him act possessive. Strongly dislike her, hope that's what you're shooting for.