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for Ever Us

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person Doris
schedule September 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for sharing!

person Kit-kit
schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter

person nchsmi
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ha!  Sounds like a typical day in my home!  LOL!  Great chapter.  I'm looking forward to little Rin's return, as well as who else will be reborn!  I'm hoping Miroku and Sango will be born after.  Bobby and Barbie are so cute.  You can tell they're gonna bemates when the time comes.  And, Suzy is just adorable!

 

B reading U!

person nchsmi
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

OMG....  Keiko is just like my oldest daughter, Monica!  She got married in summer, 15, and her little brothers and sisters where sooooo happy when she came for a visit this Summer!

Keiko's a true princess.  Is Steven a bit infatuated with his big sister?  LOL!

Love it!

 

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person nchsmi
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow!  Rin was a spring baby!  That was perfect!  Seeing her passion for flowers, and nature waking up from winter.  That was great!  Now I see why you called this 'Ever Us'!  I love those rings.  And, InuYasha's sounds gorgeous!  I have one of my own.  So does my mom, and both my sisters!  My brother iis giving one to his wife for her birthday in 2 months.  They are spectacular, aren't they?  I love this story!  A threesome with Kagome after she returns from the feudal era?  Nah.  I just can't see Sesshoumaru wanting to share InuYasha with anyone like that.  She would be better off as one of the children.  LOL!  Besides, she'd do nothing but drive them nuts if she wasn't a child!.  Hahaha!

 

Great job!

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person Kit-kit
schedule September 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So rin is first to be reincarnated ..im excited to read more

person Kit-kit
schedule September 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter..i wonder who is going to be reincarnated 

person nchsmi
schedule September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Awwww!!!  InuYasha's not pregnant!?  To bad!  Well, that just means Sesshoumaru will have to work a bit harder.   LOL!!!!  This is awesome, I've been waiting for this story to continue!

 

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person nchsmi
schedule September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ohhhh!!!  I love those two!!!  Very sexy chapter, I can't wait to see what else Sesshoumaru has planned for him!

 

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person nchsmi
schedule September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

He might not be pregnant, but he could be ovulating!  That can cause some women to have an imbalance.  I know I went through it on several occasions!  That could have been the cause of InuYasha's moodiness.  His feeling unappreciated by his family.  Well, from what I can see, Sesshoumaru is really making up for that oversight!  

Brilliant work!

B reading U!