rate_review Reviews

I love this story

Wow. This is a VERY good story. The best one shot I've read in a really long time. It could really be a chapter store and with the way you write I would just get lost in your world. The sex scenes felt real. Omg it was so good. Bravo!

Amazing! Please continue this!

A++ Would read again as many times as Seshomaru and Kagome want to be together!

I don't like most oneshots but this was great! There was a nice story under here and seems like a great oneshot ending to post Naraku days - closure with Inuyasha and a new love.

While I don't mind lemons, I don't particularly like mindless heavy lemons that read as porn without a story. This was hot and heavy but it was sweet.

Thanks for the enjoyable read!

Gee woman! For someone who doesn't usually write anything above PG, you are a goddess!!!!

This story was hot and drenched in sexiness and so welcomed! it was quite sexy and I loved everything about it!, Maybe you should consider writing more of this? -we could only hope-.

Anyway, great job! Really nice for a one shot, wish you would write something longer. You definitely know how to turn the heat on!

Oh my gosh you killed it. This was an awesome one shot; I'm so glad you let it take you where it did! The length was great. You managed to give a full picture of them and their relationship that felt like nothing was lacking. It felt like more than just a quick rut like so many ones shots feel like! You had me rooting for them as a couple almost immediately. :) The first scene was written in such an interesting way! I read it twice! Thanks for this awesome story! I'm excited to read more of your other stuff! 

This is great! I loved how you kept them in character, but made their relationship plausible. The differences in them as characters made sense from the backstory and their friendship.The entire thing was written well and the length is amazing! It seems as if most one-shots nowadays are very short and don't have any actual story to them. This was a breath of fresh air!The chemistry between the characters was fabulous! The sex scenes were well written and very hot! I love the touches that connected his demonic side! This could very easily be a chaptered story, since you gave us such a good foundation for them. However, as a one-shot, it stands well on its own.Great job!-M

Super hot! Your story isn't just hot, but it's nice and long, as well as just about perfectly spelled and punctuated. Thank you for posting.