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Giggity. I love all the sex in this story but I also love how fluidly the dialogue flows. For me, the fine dialogue makes the sex more vivid, more colorful. Great job.

So glad to see an update! This is such a unique story, but I'm glad to hear it's about halfway through, only because I don't want poor Kagome and Inuyasha to have to suffer through too much more of Kikyou's insanity. Yeah, Inuyasha's been a dick to Kagome a few times, and I wouldn't have forgiven him as quickly for that stunt he pulled with her mother (not that her mother should really be acting like such a bitch, either, but maybe that's just me, 'cause I'm not a prude) but Kikyou is turning into a total psycho bitch and Kagome and Inuyasha should definitely get together and ditch the psycho, before Kagome ends up getting seriously hurt. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Ok first Happy Birthday. Second thanks for the update.

Happy belated birthday! And what an awesome story! I knew it would be, when I realized you were the author. I must admit, though, from just the vague title and summary I was totally thinking it was going to be an Inu/Kag/Sess threeway. I was so not expecting Kikyou, but it's a fabulous surprise! I certainly have nothing against any f/f scenes, and I like this Kikyou, even if she is a bit of a bitch to Inuyasha at times. Certainly looks like he's a dick enough of the time to warrant her being a bitch in return. Although I'd had a lot of sympathy for him in the beginning, trying to see everything from his point of view since Kikyou just sprung all this on him, I'm on the fence now for whether or not I should hate him at this point, LOL. It was cruel what he'd done before, making Kagome think he'd just used her on the beach, but he'd apologized afterwards, and in a way I can see how he could take advantage of the moment, kill two birds with one stone, like he'd said. He'd wanted to be alone with Kagome anyway, but then knowing Kikyou was watching, he was like fine, let her watch, stupid bitch, so yeah, I can see that. Rubbing it in Kikyou's face just inadvertently made Kagome think it'd all been a game for show only, like he hadn't wanted to otherwise. But what he did just now in chapter five... On the one hand, I can maybe agree that it shouldn't be right for Kagome to have them lie to her family, but then maybe Kagome should have just not invited her mom over at all, even with Kikyou saying it was all right. And surely they could have lied, should have lied, instead of trying to dance around it and avoid answering the question at all. If Kagome didn't want to make them lie for her then she should have just lied herself, and right away instead of delaying. When her mother asked her the first time she should have said she was the live-in housekeeper. Her mom certainly wouldn't need to know that Inuyasha is a house husband and presumably does all the cleaning himself. She also shouldn't have been rudely ignoring Inuyasha like she was, like she was afraid to even have him in the same room with her mom and brother. I can see how that might have irked Inuyasha and caused him to say what he said as a form of revenge, but I still think he was in the wrong. Of course, Kagome's already fallen for him hard, so it's not too likely that she'd storm out on him like it sounds like Kikyou is ready to do. I presume this is going to wind up being Inu/Kag? Which is fine by me! Yeah, he's a bit of a dick, but he wouldn't be our Inuyasha otherwise, LOL, so whatcha gonna do? But I do certainly hope Mrs. Higurashi forgives her daughter. I mean hell, Kagome's a grown woman and she can be in a threeway if she wants to be, first of all, and second of all she paid to rebuild the shrine, and it's not like she's doing anything illegal, like she's a hooker out on the street or dealing drugs or anything weird/dangerous. She did it for her family. Like she'd thought to herself, she'd had a lot of reasons to agree, and only about half were selfish, the part that's living in the nice house, the nice clothes and food and of course hey we can't forget about the awesome sex. But it sounds like all her money was being dumped into construction if the shrine is nearly rebuilt, not to mention she picked up more classes at college again that she's paying for. Her mom didn't even know Kagome lost her apartment and had been living in her car working three jobs just to keep her one favorite college class! She's got no idea how hard off Kagome had had it. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next with this fabulous story of yours. Keep up the awesome work!

Poor Inuyasha I feel so bad for him! I hope things get better for him soon...

OK now am interested in where this is going.

Very well written and a very engaging plot so far! I enjoyed this first chapter and I'm super curious to see what happens next! Please update soon again!