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for Deliverance

by inufan625

person chancelor22
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so where is the rest of it? lol it's got my attention. and i would very much like to read more of it. XD
person Just Me
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good! She is finally getting some of her inner strength back, and she is patient enough to not rush him. I like the fact that
she understands why he feels the way he does and is not giving up. As always, your writing is impeccable and the pace is perfect. Love the way this story is developing. Please update soon again!























schedule April 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now this has me wondering who the bad guy is and poor hojo dead he never gets a break in these story ( smile)
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is just great.
person Just Me
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My God!! You have been sorely missed! I have always loved your stories and have admired your talent as a writer, and to see you writing again just make me want to jump for joy! Great story, and the characters are well developed and not overly done. (God knows I have seen enough of those from people who think they can write just because there is a keyboard available) I have enjoyed every chapter immensely, and desperately look forward to your next update.

Hugs and warm wishes:

Me.
schedule April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story easily hooked me. It sounds so good can't wait for next chap.