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for Deliverance

by inufan625

schedule August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chap so glad for the update. See you next time.
schedule July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It was so good to see the new chap. This story is really good.looking forward to next chap.
schedule July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I hope you complete it!
person shyneamor
schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Soooo, when you planning on updating?
person Babydragon213
schedule June 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woooooow!! I love your story so far, you're like a Davinci in writing! You have amazing talent! I bet you could get a book published! Keep up the amazing work and please hurry with the next chappie!
schedule May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loving this really glad ka is so strong.
schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow I enjoyed this. The story is compiling.
person Just Me
schedule May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My gosh! That was just beautiful! They are so perfect for each other and the fact that they finally came together made this update my favorite so far! They are both so tender and having Inuyasha being so sweet and the care he shows towards her, the tenderness, how careful and patient he is , just makes me fall in love even more with your depiction of this beloved character!

One thing that kept me a bit confused is that I never found out how Inuyasha got hurt? Who did it? When?

Did I miss something? I got lost and kept going back and forth trying to figure it out but I ended up just as confused. Can you please explain it? Also, it seemed so odd that Kagome didn't ask him how he got hurt, or by whom. Was there a page that I missed?.

In any case, I hope that you will update soon again!
schedule May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can't tell you how much am loving this story.
person shyneamor
schedule May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG, it's like reading a novel. I love this story and can't wait to read the next chapter. Awesome Story