First off, bravo! This story is very engaging! I enjoy seeing the characters in a different setting, more present-day. I'm looking forward to seeing more chapters, and while I'll be sad that this must come to an eventual end (not too soon, I hope!), I do hope that this will have the ending it deserves and not fizzle out like so many others do. The story is so well done, in fact, that the minor errors are easy to overlook. However, should you choose to have it updated, I'll be more than happy to send you a proof-read copy.
The tornados last year werr awful. We are from Richardson, and one of the tornados came within about a 1/4 mile from out home, as well. I'm not going to lie, I cried when I saw the damage of our city the next morning, and especially the absolute decimation of Walnut Hill in Dallas (the worst hit that night) on my way to work the next day. I do hope your property has survived and been repaired.
This is a wonderful story, please please please finish it.
I have really enjoyed this story and have read it several times. It has action adventure and love and lust, I really wish you would finish it please
love it ah wish there was more!
Please continue :)
I love this story, and i'm excited to see how things go. Expecially with that dance.
Been waiting a year for an update!!!! Please, keep going!!!
more soon pleas
Such an awesome one, I've read it like 10 times please update soon I would love to read what happens next 😊