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I enjoyed this chapter but I'm a bit confused about what it said at the start of the chapter, where it said: + Add Chapter. I've never seen this in a story before and I'm unaware of what it means. Does it mean that this story will be continued, is it a mistake that isn't supposed to show up on posted chapter/story or does it mean that it's open for other's to continue?
I must admit that while I really did enjoy what I read, I was a bit confused at how quickly the situation between Sessh and Kagome seemed to change. When she 1st saw him upon her arrival, it appeared as if his reaction was similar to if she'd suddenly showed up at a time when they weren't on friendly terms. Then the next time she ran into him (quite literally 'ran into him') he seemed unable to control himself, immediately asked her to be his mate and they began having sex, just as quickly. I'd love to read more and find out what their situation/relationship was like prior to this happening. I'm also curious as to how Kikyo became alive again if Kagome still has the jewel and has yet to wish upon it.

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Well it was a good story.

Nice idea, but seemed very rushed. There was no real build up. You mention Sesshoumaru hates humans, even give a hint that she's nuts to go see him. She's goes there to discuss Rin, which is never explained about why, and then she's suddenly jumped by Sesshoumaru who decides to mate her and she just agrees with it because she's actracted to him. Just made it very blah and rushed.