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cant wait tell next chap.

Until Kikyo shows up again saying she's either pregnant or to just make it known that he had a twisted affair the entire time they separate from each other.

"Burying his nose in her hair, he pressed her closer to him, hearing her giggle in her sleep. It wouldn’t be much longer, he vowed. Soon, they’d be together forever."

I bet it'll be like the end of "The Fly" (1986).

Not that his dad is any where near a relationship expert, but how is a honeymoon supposed to fix their marriage after he raped and sodomized her (acknowledging that parts of him enjoyed her fear and the act) to then attack someone followed by months of not going home and having his own twisted, abusive relationship with shades of Sesshoumaru? It's amazing, but not very surprising, that his father thinks it's just to act like none of it ever happened? I wonder how long it's going to take before anyone, hopefully Kagome, realizes that Inuyasha is not ready for a relationship or that type of job (with no qualifications whatsoever other who his dad is) and needs some help? I'm looking forward to when Kagome realizes that even if she wants to be with Inuyasha that he needs to doing a lot of self-work and maturing to be ready for this lifestyle.
Oh, sometimes life happens and you can't update as frequently. No worries. The writing effort is appreciated.

First no the mom is a bitch she's just human. Plus I believe she has a point. Ka new her mom was f*** him and she still messed with him.

Wow this just took a turn into messed up.

I am much more amused than what I probably should be feeling. I love the wham line that you ended the chapter with. it was such a f*** you moment to her mom and Inuyasha, and they totally deserved it. when I came across your story everything was already written,well I didn't have a lot of time to think about how the story was going to play out but deep down inside part of me felt like he was going to mess up because he was too afraid to tell her the truth of why he was there. I really hope you are going to continue this. I want to see Inuyasha freak out and go into a jealous fit over Kagome's announcement. I really want to see the drama.

Fuck!! Damn!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the most intense, gut wrenching chapter I have ever read in my long life of fanfiction! I was ready to puke by how much my stomach was up in my throat!! Way to go! You got me almost feeling like a pregnant teenager! Whew! Damn! I have no words...!
Oh please, for the love of anything that is sacred to you, please update soon or I am going to end up with an ulcer! My entire left side is in knots! I need a drink!

Your comments on your own experience as a pediofiles victim and how it influence your writing open up a new level of understanding. ( please make no mistake even if you believed you where willing you where a victim if you were 13 and he 10 years older.)You have much talent. Good story.

Oh poor grandpa.