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for Virgin Desires

by ScorpianPriestesd

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schedule June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was very good. I love how much in love Kagome and Inuyasha are with each other. It was wonderful and the sex scenes were hot. Will wait for another one from you as this was fun.
schedule June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved the whole story thanks for the extra chap
schedule March 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good one! I can forgive the errors since you said you were pulling an all-nighter to get it busted out. It definitely needs a good proofread, but meh, when your brain is up for it. In the meantime, it was still a kick ass story. I wonder if Inuyasha ever confessed that he had indeed been spying on Kagome from his apartment, the apartment he didn't even live in until realizing where she lived, LOL. Oh and I love the uncle like oh by the way, turn off the security camera, LOL. Priceless. At least he obviously must have already known how Kagome was, and she just didn't know he knew, otherwise he would've probably flipped out. Guess he knew they wouldn't object to the marriage! LOL.
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this. Fast paced funny and just the right amount of leamon. I also liked it wasn't too long. I read one of your other stories like that one too. New fan.